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Harry Potter and the Philosopher’s Stone

Nowadays there are a lot of films which are popular among young, adult and old people. A good example can be Harry Potter and the Philosopher’s Stone. It is an action, star studded cast film. This film is directed by Chris Columbus. It tells the story of young boy who live in magic world and his closest friends. The cast in film is excellent: Daniel Radcliffe as Harry, Rupert Grint as Ron, Emma Watson as Hermiona. These days they are big stars know all over the world.
The story is based on great book written by Joanne Rowling. The novel begins with the Wizarding world’s celebrations of Lord Voldemort who killed Lilly and James Potter, but the story concerns on their son Harry who live with his bad relatives. One day the truth comes in the form of Hagrit who tells Harry that he is a real Wizard and his parents were outstanding magicians. One month later Harry goes to Hogwarts to lern how to use magic. Harry meet Ron and Hermiona. Everyones admire him. Harry have amazing scar on a forehead. He is a brilliant student. He must also protects special Philosopher Stone. Harry rescues Hogwart.
Harry Potter is a very good film. The plot is fast-moving. Spectacular special effects and a star studded cast makes this film highly interesting. The acting is powerful. The music and songs are impressive.
I think that this film is definitely worth seeing. On the whole I would recommend it.

Nowadays there are a lot of films which are popular among young, adult and old people. A good example can be Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone. It is an action, star studded cast film. This film is directed by Chris Columbus. It tells the story of young boy who live in magic world and his closest friends. The cast in film is excellent: Daniel Radcliffe as Harry, Rupert Grint as Ron, Emma Watson as Hermiona. These days (they - wykreślić, masz już these, więc nie może być THESE, powtarzasz wtedy podmiot w zdaniu) are big stars know all over the world.
The story is based on great book written by Joanne Rowling. The novel begins with the Wizarding world's celebrations of Lord Voldemort who killed Lilly and James Potter, but the story concerns on their son Harry who live("s" - 3 os. l.poj., używasz czasu Present Simple, pamiętaj o konstrukcji) with his bad relatives. One day the truth comes in the form of Hagrit who tells Harry that he is a real Wizard and his parents were outstanding magicians. One month later Harry goes to Hogwarts to lern how to use magic. Harry meet(s - present simple) Ron and Hermiona. Everyones (lepiej everybody admires him) admire him. Harry have (has - present simple) amazing scar on a forehead. He is a brilliant student. He must also protects special Philosopher Stone. Harry rescues Hogwart.
Harry Potter is a very good film. The plot is fast-moving. Spectacular special effects and a star studded cast makes this film highly interesting. The acting is powerful. The music and songs are impressive.
I think that this film is definitely worth seeing. On the whole I would recommend it.

dziekuje bardzo z apoprawe. Pisałam to bardzo szybko i nawety nie zwróciłam uwage na tak kosmetyczne błędy. Bardzo dziekuje:)

___These days (they - wykreślić, masz już these, więc nie może być THESE, powtarzasz wtedy podmiot w zdaniu) are big stars know all over the world.----

these days wystepuje tu jako okolicznik czasu a nie podmiot. zdanie jest poprawne trzeba tylko uzyc tu strony biernej -they are known-- pozwole sobie caly tekst poprawic
> Nowadays there are a lot of films which are popular among young,
>adult and old people. A good example can be Harry Potter and the
>Philosopher's Stone. It is an action, star studded cast film. This
>film is directed by Chris Columbus. It tells the story about a young boy and his closest friends
>who live in a magic world. The cast of the film is
>excellent: Daniel Radcliffe as Harry, Rupert Grint as Ron, Emma Watson
>as Hermiona. These days they are big stars known all over the world.
> The story is based on a great book written by Joanne Rowling. The novel
>begins with the Wizarding world's celebrations of Lord Voldemort (nie wiem za bardzo o co tu chodzi) who
>killed Lilly and James Potter, but the story focuses on their son
>Harry who lives with his bad relatives. One day Hagrit brings the truth. He tells Harry that he is a real Wizard and his
>parents were outstanding magicians. One month later Harry goes to
>Hogwart to learn how to use magic. Harry meets Ron and Hermiona.
>Everyone admires him. Harry has an amazing scar on his forehead. He is a
>brilliant student. He must also protect special Philosopher's Stone.
>Harry rescues Hogwart.
> Harry Potter is a very good film. The plot is fast-moving.
>Spectacular special effects and a star studded cast make this film
>extremely interesting. The acting is powerful. The music and songs are
>impressive.
> I think that this film is definitely worth seeing. I
>would recommend it to everyone.