>I write to you with proposition.
I'm writing to you with a proposition.
>Recently I rode a magazine,
rode - zły czasownik
and I
>found interesting adverbisement for health freaks camp.
and I found an interesting advertisement for a health freaks camp.
>The camp is at Zakopane in the mountains.
in Zakopane
This camp will start on 11
>of February and the will finish on 21 of February.
....starts on.....and ends on....
zamiast "starts on....and ends on..." można napisać "runs from (data) to (data)."
It lookes like we could ski, to go on the hike and to go
>snowboard.
It looks like we could ski, snowboard, and go on hikes.
>This all give our healt and stay in shape.
All of this is good for our health and will help us stay in shape.
We will do
>exercises everyday.
We will exercise everyday.
>I thing, that this camp will be a good idea.
I think that this camp...
>I hope that this winter
>holidays will very successfull.
przyrostek "ful" ma tylko jedno "l". Zawsze.
....will be very....