Informal letter-pr. o spr.

Bardzo prosze o sprawdzenie (poprawienie błedów) w moim liscie.
Bede wdzieczn - z gory dziekuje


Dear Brother!

Hi! Thanks for your last letter, sorry I've taken ages to write back but I've been really busy.I've got so much to tell you.

I'm in England from month. My pen-friend and his family is very hospitable.
When I saw Mrs. and Mr.Smith I think they are a uninteresing people,but now I know they're kindly,modest and very nice. Every morning I have a traditional breakfast and cup of hot English tea.
In weekends my friend and I go fishing and then we have fish on dinner.
Bobby's grandma is very funny woman she make a sweters. I have one he is red with green striped. Bobby's mum work in hospital she is a doctor. He's dad work in a bank.
I like this family,
I have a good fun there!

On three weeks a back to home I know you miss for me.
What about you. How are you?
Have you started your exams yet? Good Look!

Please write again soon.
Best whises.
Tom

Bardzo prosze o sprawdzenie...

To dla mnie naprawde wazne - bede niezmiernie wdzieczn.
bardzo prosze =)

Potrzebuje na jutro! :(

i'm in England from month. nie ten czas , uzywamy present perfect , mianowicie I have been in England for month.

He's dad work in a bank --- his dad works in a bank.

>On three weeks a back to home I know you miss for me. --- I going back to home next week. I think you missed me too much.

Good Look! --- good luck!

In weekends my friend and I go fishing and then we have fish on
>dinner. --- I go fishing with my friends on weekend so then we will have fishes in dinner.

ehh nie jestem pewna.. jeszcze widze pare bykow ale nie potrafie poprawic..

ok, dzieki to poprawie. Zawsze mam błedy w gramatyce... :)
A wzystko pozostałe jest juz dobrze?? :|

Ok bardzo dziekuje, i tak mi pomogłaś. =)

Napisze tylec co zauważyłam: poza wcześniejszymi uwagami.
sorry It's been ages since I last wrote you, but I've been very busy recently.(tak bym to napisała)
When I first met Mrs ....... I found them unintersting, but now I think they are kind (bez l)....
Bobby's grandma is A very funny woman, who makes sweater (chociaż nie wiem czy make sweater jest poprawnie i ogólnie to zdanie dziwnie brzmi. She gave me one of her sweaters, the one which is red with white stripes. Bobby's mum workS in ...., HIS dad workS in a bank.
I'll be back home within three weeks, I know you miss me. (bez for).

Naprawde baardzo dziekuje. Biore sie za poprawianie błedów,
i pozdrawiam =D

He's dad work in a bank --- his dad works in a bank.
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Mileismy tutaj zasady na tym forum - teraz to nie wiem czy nawet one istnieja.
Jak poprawiamy, to robimy to bezblednie

>On three weeks a back to home I know you miss for me.
*I going back 'to'??? home next week. I think you missed me too much. - to zdanie nnie jest gram - potrzebuje poprawy.
>In weekends my friend and I go fishing and then we have fish on
>>dinner. ---
*I go fishing with my friends 'on'??? weekend so then we will have 'fishes'??? 'in' ??? dinner.
To zdanie nie jest gram - potrzebuje poprawy.

>>>When I saw Mrs. and Mr.Smith jest zasada, ze stawiamy MR & MRS.....