Witam.
Proszę o sprawdzenie mojej rozprawki - wady i zalety medycyny alternatywnej.
Nowadays alternative methods of treatment become more and more popular. People turn to htem when traditional treatment fails. However, it is worth to analyse it's advantages and disadvantages.
Firstly, alternative medicine is, in most of cases, safer than traditional treatment. It does not use invasive methods. Secondly, medicines used in this kind of therapy are of natural origin. Some of them, for example, are produced from plants. What is more, they cause less side effects. Even doctors use them as a complement of conventional treatment.
On the other hand, alternative medicine can be harmful, if it is not used properly. Some of the herbal medicine can be toxic, if they contain poisonous plants. Moreover, uncorrectly done [to pewnie jest źle, ale chciałam napisać 'niepoprawnie wykonane'] treatment, for example acupuncture, can threat our life. Another drawback is that alternative methods of treatment usually cost a lot of money and not everyone can afford them. There are also cases, that people who offer such medicine can be just cheaters and sell us fake medicines.
To sum up, although alternative medicine has a lot of advantages, it also has negative aspects. It is important not to use this kind of treatment rashly and check it before using. I think it is worth trying, especially when the traditional therapy does not work.
Z góry dziękuję za sprawdzenie :)
P.S.
Mile widziane także jeszcze propozycje zalet, bo mam wrażenie, że jeszcze jakieś by się przydały, a temat medycyny alternatywnej to dla mnie czarna magia.