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Dear Sussan,

I'm so glad you're coming next Friday. I'm really looking forward to seeing you. The easiest way to get here is take the number 105 bus (when you leave railway station by west exit in Galeria Krakowska, you will see the bus stop). You'll ride along Pawia Street, and next the bus will turn right and ride down the 29 Listopada Street for about two kilometres. When you rode under the overpass, you must get off, and wait on that bus stop on any bus except number105. If you get into the bus, you must get off on second stop. When you went of, go across the street, and then turn right. The first block you'll see is mine. If you want cross over the gate, you must enter the code (2788). Next you go left to the second staircase, and enter second code (4994). You go up the stairs on second floor and knock in first door on the left. Probably some guy will open the door and tell you, that I live on third floor. Uuups, my mistake, I don't write in english very well :)

The easiest way to get here is TO take the number .
When you 'rode' (tutaj lepiej 'have gone') under the overpass, you must get off,
and wait 'on' AT that bus stop 'on' FOR any bus except number 105. 'If' (tutaj mozna ONCE) you get into the bus, you must get off on THE second stop. When you 'went' GET of, go across the street, and then turn right. The first block OF FLATS you'll see is mine.
If you want TO cross over the gate..
You go up the stairs TO 'on' THE second floor and knock 'in' ON THE first door on the left.

Wielkie dzięki :)

If you get ON the bus, you must get off AT THE second stop.