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In today’s word having a hobby is important. Nowadays a lot of people spend they free time in front of television or computer. You shoudn’t waste time because you haven’t got them enough.
Firstly, having a hobby is important because you can come on (rozwijać się). When you do your favorite active for a long time you conquer experience and you can use them in your life time.
Secondly, it is a good opportunity to meet new people and visit new places. You can talk, (wymienić doświadczeniem) just learning more about it or writing about it or even teaching others in some way. Having a hobby will guarantee you a lot of fun and unforgettable events.
What is more, hobbyists often find a talent or passion they may not have known they had before. Some people have take a seat at the piano to learn how to play, only to find out they’ve always had a hidden talent for playing it anyway.
Most hobbies are an ideal way to relax. Coming home from work and sitting down to enjoy your favorite entertainment helps to take your mind off of the stresses of the day. Hobbies also help you relax before bed.
On the other hand, it can become dependent on hobby. In one time you will too much time spending on it and you forgot about reality.
In conclusion, you have a series of choices, and all of them are decent and admirable and can offer an enormous satisfaction. It is you who has to decide upon one or many exploiting it at maximum.