Coś o sobie

Bardzo prosze o sprawdzenie i poprawienie jężeli jest taka możliwość ;]
Oto co napisałam :

My name is Sonia. I wos born 15th February 1993 year. I'm sixteen. My zodiac sing is Aquarius. I'm from Poland. I live in Pyskowice. I have two years older brother- Paweł. My mather is < pedagogiem nie wiem czy w języku angilelskim występuje takie słowo> , my father repair fridge and freezer.
I study in Zespół Szkół SP5 GIM2 i Pyskowice. Maths, chemistry and English are subject wchich I like.I'm interested in sports. I like playing volleyball, swiming.When I wos on holidays ex; Egypt or Turkey I'm scuba diving. I love skiing, always in March I wos arriwed Austria with my family. My hobby is dance. My dance team call PARADOX. I'm training TAE KWON-DO since 2004 year. The most sukces in my life I had in TEA KWON-DO < 3 trophys, 2 ,,statuetka", 4 golden,7 silver and 5 brown medals. I have some medals in runnig. I fall into a theater teenanger CARPE DIEM.I have priwat English lesson. I spend my free time with my freinds. I like going out to cinema.I love painting . I don't like reading books.I like listening music : dance , pop , hip-hop , reegeage. When I wos older I wont be arhitect .

Bardzo prosze o sprawdzenie .....;]

I 'wos' (ortog) born ON THE 15th February 1993. 'year' (niepotr). I'm sixteen.
I have 'two years older brother' (napisz to inaczej...have a brother, Pawel, who is two years older than me). My 'mather' (ortog) is 'pedagogiem' (czy to teacher?), my father repairS fridge and freezer.
I study in 'Zespół Szkół SP5 GIM2' (niestety to trzeba po ang) 'i' (ortog) Pyskowice. Maths, chemistry and English are THE subject 'wchich' (ortog) I like.
I like playing volleyball AND 'swiming' (ortog). When I 'wos' (ortog) on holidays 'ex' (co to - piszemy 'for example' albo 'e.g'.; Egypt or Turkey
'I'm' I GO scuba diving. I love skiing, always in March I 'wos' (co to z tym 'wos' - czy myslisz juz o maturze, z tego?) 'arriwed' (ortog i niepotr) IN Austria with my family. My hobby is dancING. My dance team IS callED PARADOX. I'm training TAE KWON-DO since 2004. 'year' (niepotr). The most 'sukces' (ortog) in my life I had in TEA KWON-DO 3 trophys, 2 'statuetka' (a po ang?), 4 golden,7 silver and 5 'brown' BRONZE medals. I have some medals in 'runnig' (ortog). I 'fall' (nie, nie o to chodzi,m przeciez sie nie potknelas i wpadlas - tutaj GO) 'into' TO a TEENAGE 'theater' THEATRE 'teenanger' (ortog) CARPE DIEM.I have 'priwat' (ortog) English lessonS (bo wiecej jak jedna). I spend my free time with my 'freinds' (ortog). I like going out to THE cinema.
I like listening TO music : dance , pop , hip-hop , 'reegeage' (ortog). When I 'wos' (znowu to 'wos - tutaj ono jest niepotr) AM older I 'wont' (ortog- i zle slowo) TO be AN 'arhitect' (ortog) .

o jejciu :] Bardzo dziękuje :*:)