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Dear Peter,
I am writing to you because I would like to offer you a trip in the Carpathian mountains.
Our goal will be to reach the Central Beskid. Deadline for the trip is the fourth of April. Trip starts from the bus station in Żywiec on the fourth morning, from where the coach to take us to the guesthouse Łupkowskiej passes. A trip is three days. Upon arrival, we have night, gaining the summit the next day. After descending from the mountains, we go to sleep again, and the next day from the morning to return home. The cost of the trip is 500 €. On the trip you should take some clothes to change, and food on the bus route and travel to the top.
I think we spend good time there . Reply as soon as you can, because in a few days may have already run out of places.
Greetings from Sopotnia
Karol

Trip starts from the bus station in Żywiec on the 'fourth morning' (nie, nie tak - morning of the 4th), from where the coach IS to take us to the guesthouse
'Łupkowskiej' (?) passes. 'A' THE trip is FOR three days. Upon arrival, we have (accommodation for the) night, (and intend) gaining the summit the next day. After descending from the mountains, we WILL go to sleep again, and EARLY the next day 'from the morning' (niepotr) WE WILL 'to' (niepotr) return home.
On the trip you should take some clothes to change, and food on the bus route and 'travel to the top' (cos tu nie tak) .
I think we WILL spend good time there. Reply as soon as you can, because
in a few days THEY may have already run out of places.
Greetings from 'Sopotnia' (a gdzie to jest?)

Haha :D Sopotnia to wieś obok Żywca :D Pozdrowienia dla Was z Sopotni :D Dzięki terri

A teraz moja praca. Poprawiłem, czy tak mogłaby wyglądać wersja finalna:

Dear Peter,
I am writing to you because I would like to offer you a trip in the Carpathian mountains.
Our goal will be to reach the Central Beskid. Deadline for the trip is the fourth of April. Trip starts from the bus station in Żywiec on the morning of the 4th from where the coach is to take us to the guesthouse Łupkowskiej passes. The trip is for three days. Upon arrival, we have accommodation for the night and intend gaining the summit the next day. After descending from the mountains, we will go to sleep again, and easrly the next day we will return home. The cost of the trip is 500 €. On the trip you should take some clothes to change, and food on the bus route and travel to the top. (z tym travel to mi chodzi o to że na czas jak pójdziemy w góry)
I think we will spend good time there . Reply as soon as you can, because in a few days they may have already run out of places.
Greetings from Sopotnia
Karol

...is to take us to the guesthouse 'Łupkowskiej passes' (nie rozumiem tego - czy to nazwa guesthouse?).
to sleep again, and 'easrly' EARLY the next day we will return home.
On the trip you should take some clothes to change, and food on the bus route and FOR THE 'travel' (moze lepiej 'climb') to the top.

Dear Peter,
I am writing to you because I would like to offer you a trip in the Carpathian mountains.
Our goal will be to reach the Central Beskid. Deadline for the trip is the fourth of April. Trip starts from the bus station in Żywiec on the morning of the 4th from where the coach is to take us to the guesthouse on (?) Łupkowskiej passes. (pensjonat na przełęczy łupkowskiej) The trip is for three days. Upon arrival, we have accommodation for the night and intend gaining the summit the next day. After descending from the mountains, we will go to sleep again, and early the next day we will return home. The cost of the trip is 500 €. On the trip you should take some clothes to change, and food on the bus route and climb to the top.
I think we will spend good time there . Reply as soon as you can, because in a few days they may have already run out of places.
Greetings from Sopotnia
Karol

>>>coach is to take us to the guesthouse on THE Łupkowski pass.

Thanks :D