proszę o sprawdzenie (krótkie)

Witam

bardzoproszę o sprawdzenie...nie jestem zbyt dobra z angielskiego, na pewno jest tu trochę błędów:

One of goals in my live was to help to people. When I find out that I got the job in the bank, because I wanted always to work in the bank, also working there I could help to people by advise them and help them financialy working there makes me happy but also helps me benefit with geting more experience.

Z góry dziękuję

jeszcze raz bardzo proszę o sprawdzenie mam to jutro....

One of THE goals in my 'live' (live to jest czasownik, a tutaj potrzeba rzeczownika) was to help 'to' (niepotr) people. When I 'find' FOUND out that I
HAD got the job in the bank, because I 'wanted always' (zla kol slow) to work in the bank, (cos to zdanie zgubilo sens)
also working there I could help 'to' (dlaczego piszesz 'to' przed people?) people by advisING them and helpING them financialLy. Working there makes me happy but also 'helps me benefit' (nie, nie tak, benefits me) 'with' IN 'geting' (ortog) more experience.

naprawdę bardzo dzękuję:)