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'Harry Potter i kamień filozoficzny' is a novel written by J.K.Rowling. It tells story of a young boy who became a wizzard.
In this book there are two worlds. The first world is full of magic and secrets and the second, where ordinary people ive. The story is about a young boy, Harry, his friends and enemies. We find out many things about magic world with Harry who didn't know about his magical powers.
The tale is very interesting, even electrifying. Turning the pages of the book we find out more and more about characters and their life. It is said that when Harry was a baby powerful wizzard Lord Voldemort tried to kill him. Voldemort cast the spell but it wasn't strong enough. Due to that meeting Harry has got a scar that looks like lightning. What is fascinating, the magic and secrets are revealed slowly and are bound to interest the young audience. The author takes us on an unforgettable and anjoyable journey, which is truly amazing.
This book became a bestseller very quickly. Due to fantastic plot Rowling's story was adapted for screen. I strongly recommend "Harry Potter i kamień filozoficzny". It has got an interesting plot and, what is the best feature of this book, you never know what will happen on the next page.

'Harry Potter i kamień filozoficzny' (prosze to napisac po ang) is a novel written by J.K.Rowling. It tells THE story of a young boy who became a 'wizzard' (ortog).
The first world is full of magic and secrets and the second, where ordinary people Live.
We find out many things about THE magic world with Harry who 'didn't' DOESN'T know about his magical powers.
Turning the pages of the book we find out more and more about THE characters and their 'life' (LIVES-l. mnoga, bo characters). It is said that when Harry was a baby powerful 'wizzard' (ortog) Lord Voldemort tried to kill him.
What is fascinating, IS THAT the magic and secrets are revealed
slowly and are bound to interest 'the' A young audience. The author takes
us on an unforgettable and 'anjoyable' (ortog) journey, which is truly amazing.
Due to THE fantastic plot Rowling's story was adapted for THE screen. I strongly recommend "Harry Potter i kamień filozoficzny"(po ang.).

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