story in conditional I - proszę o pilne sprawdzeni

Witam proszę o sprawdzenie moich wypocin...
To bardzo pilne i ważne więc liczę na Waszą pomoc...


If I get a leave , I will sleep all day.
When I sleep all day, I will be rested.
As soon as I am rested, I will meet my friends.
If I meet my friends, I will go with them to the pub.
No matter how much time I spend with them, I will play well.
When I play well, I will be happy.
If I am happy, I will come back to job and work better.
On condition that I work better, I will get promotion.
If I get promotion, I will earn a lot of money.
After I earn a lot of money I will buy a new house.
When I buy a new house, I will feel better.
If I feel better, I will have good idea.
When I have good idea, I will get second promotion.
If I get second promotion, I will be a millionaire.
If to be a millionaire, I will have everything.
If I have everything I will be the happiest person on the wold.

If I get 'a' (niepotr) leave , I will sleep all day.
No matter how much time I spend with them, I will 'play well' (zle pojecie, konotacje, zmien).
When I 'play well' (zmien), I will be happy.
If I am happy, I will come back to THE job and work better.
On condition that I work better, I will get A promotion.
If I get A promotion, I will earn a lot of money.
After I (tu cos brakuje) earnED a lot of money I will buy a new house.
If I feel better, I will have A good idea.
If 'to be a millionaire' (pomysl o tym), I will have everything.
If I have everything I will be the happiest person 'on' IN (prosze nie robic tej kalki z polskiego, 'na'-polskie nie zawsze sie tlumaczy jako 'on) the 'wold' (ortog)

Czy już wszystko dobrze ??

If I get leave , I will sleep all day.
When I sleep all day, I will be rested.
As soon as I am rested, I will meet my friends.
If I meet my friends, I will go with them to the pub.
No matter how much time I spend with them, I will have a great fun .
When I have a great fun, I will be happy.
If I am happy, I will come back to the job and work better.
On condition that I work better, I will get a promotion.
If I get a promotion, I will earn a lot of money.
After I earned a lot of money I will buy a new house.
When I buy a new house, I will feel better.
If I feel better, I will have a good idea.
When I have good idea, I will get second promotion.
If I get second promotion, I will be a millionaire.
If I am a millionaire, I will have everything.
If I have everything I will be the happiest person in the world.