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I would like to portray my cousin because she is very interesting for me.
Diana is tall and athletic girl. She has brown eyes, short and black hair and she wears ear-ring in her nose. I don't like it. My cousin finished institution of higher education on degree subject of humanities scholar. However she doesn't work in this job. Besides she helps older people abroad, because then she gives some cashes.
While she was working abroad 2 years ago, I learned in my school. Then we were writing with itself, as usual.
Diana is A tall and athletic girl. She has brown eyes, short and black
hair and she wears AN/ONE ear-ring in her nose.
My cousin finished 'institution of higher education on degree subject of
humanities scholar' (nie, tak nie mowimy, dlaczego nie napisalas UNIVERSITY WITH A DEGREE IN HUMANITIES?).
However she doesn't work in this 'job' (nie, zle slowo, daj tutaj 'FIELD'). Besides (ale besides czego?) she helps older people abroad, because then she 'gives some cashes' (tego nie rozumiem).
Then we were writing 'with itself' NIE - tpo jest kalka z polskiego tutaj WITH EACH OTHER), as usual.
no okej, dzieki....a tutaj: 'gives some cashes' chodzilo mi o to, ze dostaje wiecej pieniedzy, chyba źle napisalam... she gets some moneys. ?
'gives some cashes' gives - znaczy DAJE/wrecza
*'cashes' to slowo nie istnieje w jez. ang.
...she gets some 'moneys' MONEY
no okej...

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