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4 points
-When and where did you learn about the job offer at a holiday camp
-they'd like to do two jobs
-Describe your skills, experience
-ask for sending information about accommodation and meal
120-150 word

Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing to apply for he position of counsellor or dance instructor as advertised in The News on the 12 September 2009
I enclose my CV with details of my work experience. As you can see, I have nerly three years' experience of working on a dence school. I have no experience as a counsellor but I have worked as baby-sister, additionally in last year I completed a course tutor colonies. I am very polite, friendly and responsible. I have excellent communication skills. I believe is a very important quality for the position of counsellor or dance instructor.
Could you give me more information about a accommodatio and meal during the cump
I hope that my application will be taken into consideration. If you feel that my qualifications meet your requirements I am available for an interview at your convenience.
I look forward to hearing from you
Yours faithfully
XYZ
As you can see, I have 'nerly' (ortog) three 'years'' (nie rozumiem uzycia apost. po years - niepotr) experience of working 'on' IN a 'dence' (ortog) school. I have no experience as a counsellor but I have worked as A baby-sister. Additionally in THE last year I completed a course ON tutor 'colonies' (nie rozumiem uzycie tego slowa tutaj).
I believe (ale co? - nie napisales) is a very important quality for the position of counsellor or dance instructor.
Could you give me more information about 'a' THE 'accommodatio' (ortog) and 'meal' (zle slowo- ) 'during' IN the 'cump' (ortog)
I completed a course tutor colonies. Maybe you've completed a camp counselor training. Uzywanie krotkich zdan, zaczynajacych sie czesto na "I", swiadczy o slabosci w pisowni obojetnie w jakim jezyku. Moze sprobuj jeszcze raz.

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