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The gays went on holiday. One day Tony, Paul and Jason went on the boat. They were sailing far of the coast.
After two hours of started the trip dark clouds covered the sky. They had to come back but it was too late. Suddenly the wind started blowing strongly and the sea become rough.. The boat was racking from side to side. Boys was scared and they knew it was too hard to continue a travel. Next, a bolt of lighting struck the boat. Friends froze in horror, so Tony radioed for help. The situation was terrible. Boys decided to jump to sea. They swam to a life raft. When gays feeling safely they saw their boat with broke must and burst into flames. They were drifting and waiting for help.
Suddenly Paul saw a shark. He was scared and dropped into sea. His life was in danger. His friends were with him. They took him out the sea. Jason heard a police boat. They can’t believed gays were save. When the police come to raft shark was going along. Friends was happy because they were alive. Police made a rapport and transported boys to hospital.
In hospital they had to make medical tests. After they returned to home: Paul, Tony and Jason. They will never sail on the boat.

I think, you meant to say "...the guys"

The 'gays' (to znaczy osoby homosexualne, tutaj masz na mysli GUYS) went on holiday. They were sailing far 'of' (mysle, ze tutaj OFF the coast.
After two hours of 'started' STARTING the trip dark clouds covered the sky.
The boat was 'racking' ROCKING (racking to cos innego) from side to side. Boys was scared and they knew it was too hard to continue 'a' THEIR travel.
THE friends froze in horror, so Tony radioed for help.
Boys decided to jump INto THE sea. They swam toWARDS a life raft. When THE 'gays' GUYS 'feeling' FELT 'safely' SAFER they saw their boat with brokeN 'must' (MAST (must to cos innego) 'and' (nie pisz 'and' bo wyglada tak jakby chlopcy wybuckli, tutaj WHICH burst into flames.
He was scared and dropped into THE sea.
They took him out OF the sea.
They 'can't' COULDN'T 'believed' BELIEVE THE 'gays' GUYS were 'save' SAVED. When the police come to THE raft THE shark was going along. Friends 'was' WERE (bo friends to l. mnoga-wtedy WERE) happy because they were alive. THE police made a 'rapport' REPORT and transported THE boys to A hospital.
In hospital they had to 'make' HAVE medical tests. After THAT they returned
'to' (niepotr) home: Paul, Tony and Jason. They will never sail on the boat AGAIN.

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