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1)In my country there are many different subcultures.
First of all are subculture Emo. Emo is the masc of word ,,emotions''.
In this group are teenagers from 12 to 18 years old. This persons are sensitive and they have a tendency to be bashful. Teenagers imperf to live really emotionaly. This style to connect with gothic and punk.
We can find in this subculture people, who wearing dark clothes with motiv of stars , death's head , hearts and check. Emos often wear pink or violet accessories for example belts with habnails, headband, bow and knee socks. They have a characteristic haircut, often with violet, pink or white hihglights ,and long fringe. The colour of hair is ussualy black. Girls and boys paint nails on black colour and their's make up is really dark and hard. In Poland to exist speciality shops for Emos.
They listen music of pop punk and hardcore. The most popular bands for emos are Blog 27, Alesana and AFI. It's music typically characterized by expressive melodic.
In their's free time they write poems, go to the concerts and partys in emo's style, but the usually are sad and nobody don't know why.
The most popular person of emo's in Avril Lavgine- famous singer.


2)The last subculture which I recount is Punk's
This subculture characterized by an opposition to gouvernment and they have a strong identify. Punk's are rebellious and they don't accept homophobia, sexism, racism. Punk's have a motto ''Punk's not dead''
Their's style is really strange. They have hard make up. They wear a dark eyeshadows, black violet or red lipstick. They have always pale complexion. Punk's have charkteristic hairstyle, for example colourful Mohican or mullet. Men's usually grow a goatee beard.
Punk's wear tights, dark clothes. .The main motif of clothes is death's head.
They often wear leather jacket, ripped jeans, t-shirts with logos of the band on it, and heavy duty shoes. They really like piercing, and thay can do a lot of earrings on their's body.
. Although their's look, Punk's don't harmless .
Punk's listen punk rock music. The lirycs of song often oppose reality.
In their's free time , Punk's go to the punk rock concerts to small and smoky clubs, write lirycs for songs, and meet with their's punk's friends.

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