Zaproszenie- proszę o spr

1. Zaproszenie- zaproś znajomych na swoje urodziny. Poinformuj ich o:
a) miejscu i czasie spotkania
b) atrakcjach
c)ilości zaproszonych gości
d) typie prezentu

I would like to invite you for my birthday. It will began at 19 o'clock of 12 March at my hause. I will organize ( wieczorek filmowy) evening movie. Maybe you bring your favourite film?
I will invite Anna, Karen and Susan apart you ( prócz Ciebie).
I would to receive books and CD's. ( chciałbym dostać/otrzymać).
I can't wait to see you!

proszę o sprawdzenie i z góry dziękuje!

I would like to invite you 'for' TO my birthday. It will 'began' BEGIN at '19
o'clock' (niema czegos takiego, albo 7p.m. albo 7o'clock albo 1900 hrs) 'of' ON THE 12 March at my 'hause' (ortog). I will organize AN evening movie. Maybe you WOULD LIKE TO bring your favourite film?
I will invite Anna, Karen and Susan apart FROM you.
I would to 'receive' (ok ale lepiej GET books and CD's.

I would to .... To jest poprawnie?