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Today in the world live about 6 billion people, over half of whom thrive IN poverty and extreme poverty. Some people are lucky in the lottery or who by their industriousness achieved prosperity.
Children born TO very famous families may not necessarily lead a happy life.
The first example in favor of good parties to be celebrated child are can be almost anything, just a word and parents meet the desires of their children, which other children can only dream ABOUT rich life.
Another argument positively evaluates the children are being rich IS learning opportunities and development OF their skills without looking at the costs involved.
On the other hand, people with rich parents are very 'hurst
Life WITHIN A famous family is very heavy THE volatility associated with rumors
and work makes FOR very frequent quarrels, which can cause a divorce or 'other consequences for example running away from home in which the child will suffer.
To sum up all the arguments mentioned above, it is difficult to say
whether being a child of famous parents is good or bad , because it
depends on the children and their perception of the world in which
they live. Nevertheless, it is known that special people criticize such a force, although they 'did' DO not know what being a child of celebrities

Jeżeli ktoś by miał chęci to prosiłabym o poprawianie.
Z góry dziękuje.

troche naprawiles, bo widze swoje poprawki tego.
Ale...
Today in the world live about 6 billion people, over half of whom
'thrive' (calkowicie zle slowo, poszukaj jego i pomysl co ty piszesz) IN poverty and extreme poverty. Some people are lucky in the
lottery OF LIFE OR THERE ARE THOSE 'or' (niepotr) who by their industriousness 'achieved' zly czas, tutaj tera. ACHIEVE) prosperity.
The first example in favor of 'good parties to be celebrated child' (Juz raz pisalam, co masz na mysli piszac 'good parties' to zdanie wymaga napisane od nowa) 'are can' (ladnie, ale co to znaczy?) be almost anything, just a word and parents meet the desires of their children, which other children can only dream ABOUT. 'rich life' (niepotr) Jak poprawiasz po mnie, to staraj sie robic tak jak ja, a nie dodawac tego co nie bylo w originale..
Another argument positively evaluates 'the children are being rich' (to niema sensu-popraw) IS learning opportunities and development OF their skills without looking at the costs involved.
On the other hand, people with rich parents are very 'hurst' (poprosilam wczesniej zebys spojrzal na to slowo, to jest blad, i dlaczego tego nie zrobiles. Czy naprawde myslisz, ze ja niemam co innego do zrobienia, jak poprawiac twoje te same bledy 10 razy? Dziecko, wez sie za siebie)
Life WITHIN A famous family is very 'heavy' (tez pisalam, ze to nie nadaje sie tutaj - poszukaj innego slowa) THE volatility associated with rumors
and work makes FOR very frequent quarrels, which can cause a divorce
or other consequences for example running away from home 'in' BY which the child will suffer.
(poprzednie zdanie pozyczone z innych zrodel)
Nevertheless, it is known that special people criticize such 'a force' (nie rozumiem co masz na mysli piszac 'force'), although they 'did' (dlaczego nie ominales tego 'did' jak Ci napisalam, ze ma byc slowo DO tutaj)DO not know what being a child of celebrities (a gdzie koniec tego zdania...jeszcze sie pisze??)e