krótkie opowiadanie

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Witajcie,
Napisałam krótkie opowiadanie i proszę o sprawdzenie i ewentualnie udzielenie jeszcze paru wskazówek. Pozdrawiam

This year Sylwia spent one month in Ogata. She flew with airplane. Sylwia get prepared for the work in refugee camp.

They all stayed in camp houses. She met a lot of interest and nice pepole. She liked them very much. Every day Sylwia cooked for the refugees. The weather was wonderful. No rain, no cloudiness. Everything was perfect.

Sylwia came to Kenya in October. She assembles money on new project.
>She flew with airplane.

Wziela samolot pod pache i poleciala z nim? :)

She went there by plane.

Sylwia GOT prepared for the work in A refugee camp. (co chcialas wyrazic tym "got prepared"?)

She met a lot of INTERESTING...

No rain and no clouds.

She assembles? zle slowo. assemble to mozna czesci czegos, aby stworzyc z tego calosc.

She is saving money for a new project? To chcialas napisac?

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