Opis rodziny po angielsku

Bardzo prosze o sprawdzenie , jestem poczatkowa osobą z angielskim i kompletnie nie wiem czy to dobrze przetłumaczyłam , proszę o pomoc to pilne:)
Mam na imię Magda. Mam 25 lat , urodziłam się i wychowałam w Polsce. W skład mojej rodziny wchodzą jeszcze , mój mąż Tomek, i synek Mikołaj.
Mój mąż .Tomek ma 26 lat . Jest przystojnym zielonookim wysokim brunetem. Pracuje w międzynarodowej firmie transportowej. Od 7 lat jest zawodowym kierowcą . Bardzo lubi wspólne wieczory we dwoje, kino , koszykówkę . Jego najlepsze cechy charakteru to , uczciwość , lojalność, pracowitość. Dla naszego synka , jest bardzo dobrym ojcem , a dla mnie troskliwym i kochanym mężem. Jest nie tylko moim życiowym partnerem , ale także najlepszym przyjacielem
Jest bardzo lubiany przez moją najbliższą rodzinę. Potrafi odnaleźć wspólne tematy z moimi rodzicami, dziadkami i resztą rodziny. Jesteśmy razem od 9 lat, a od 4 prowadzimy wspólne życie.
Nasz synek nazywa się Mikołaj .Ma 1 rok i 15 miesięcy. Jest bardzo podobny do swojego taty, ale ma moje cechy charakteru . Ma ładne niebieskie oczy i blond włosy. Jest kochanym urwisem. Uwielbia samochody i różne piłki do grania . Jest bardzo wesołym ale spokojnym dzieckiem. Odkąd przyszedł na świat , nie możemy się nim nacieszyć. Mimo iż nie potrafi jeszcze mówić , używa tylko pojedynczych wyrazów , potrafi przekazać nam ogrom swojej miłości. Bardzo szybko się uczy , jest naprawdę mądrym dzieckiem.
Jeżeli chodzi o mnie , to nie będę długo pisać . Jestem zwykłą dziewczyną z ambicjami . Odkąd urodził się .Mikołaj , pracuje nad jego wychowaniem. Kiedy skończyłam szkołę , zdobyłam bagaż doświadczeń związanych z pracą. Mam nadzieję , że uda mi się znaleźć odpowiednią pracę i zapewnić rodzinie stabilizację . Podjęłam naukę w szkole administracyjnej , aby doskonalić swoje umiejętności . Moje plany są dość rozbudowane , będę je powoli ale wytrwale realizować, nie oczekuję od życia wiele , chciałabym być dobrą mamą i żoną. Mam nadzieję , że moje niespełnione marzenia i plany , kiedyś się spełnią .


My name is Magda , I'm 25 years old/ I was born and raised in Poland. I live with my husband Tomek and son Mikołaj.
My husband is 26 years old. He is handsome green-eyed tall brunet. He works in international transport company. Since 2003 he is proffesional driver. He enjoys very likes movies in cinema and bascetball. His greatest features are: honestly, loyality, and assiduity. He is very good father for our son, and mindful (nie iwem jak jest przykladny) husband for me. He is not only my lifes partner, he is also my best friend. My family likes him very much. He can find common topics with my parents, grandparents and the rest of family. We are together for 9 years, and for 4 years we are living together.
Our sinecure name is Mikołaj. Has year end 15 monthly . Is very is very similar to his dad , but has too my craft union reliability . Has pretty blue eyes , and blond hair .Is beloved rascal. Loves cars and miscellaneous pills until shell . Is very .....whereas as well still youngster . From birth we can not enjoy it . Past that not potrafi yet bids , use the following only solitary word , can give us the magnitude of your love . Learns very quickly , is is really a wise child .
As for me , I will not be long to write . I'm used to maiden ex self-respect . I was born in Mikołaj , working on his upbringing .When bring to a conclusion school , taking into account luggage vets work-related . I hope , that thighs me yourselves find a suitable job , and provide family stabilization .Made a study School Administration , by perfect craft . My plans are quite sophisticated ,........,does not expect much from life ,wishes be goods parent as well ......
I hope , that my dreams are not fulfilled as well draft sometime yourselves redeems .

Jako osoba 'poczatkowa z ang' myslalam, ze zabierasz sie za teksty, ktore potrzebuja osobe na poziomie najmniej intermediate.
Ja to sprawdze, ale nie poprawie, zeby bylo ok. - bo wtedy TY sie nie wezmiesz za prace. Gdsie napisalam, ze nie rozumiem zdania, to znaczy, ze albo nie uzylas ang. gramatyki, albo slowa nie sa odpowiednie.

He is handsome green-eyed tall 'brunet' (Ale to jest przeciez polskiw slowo) . He works in (tu cos brakuje - przedimek) international transport company. Since 2003 he is (tu cos brakuej) proffesional driver. 'He enjoys very likes' (tego nawet nie rozumiem, poczytaj o uzyciu 'very') movies in (tu cos brakuje)cinema and 'bascetball' (ortog).
He is (tu cos brakuje) very good father for our son, and mindful (OK) husband for me.
He can find common topics with my parents, grandparents and the rest of (tu cos brakuje) family. We 'are' (zly czas - HAVE BEEN together for 9 years, and for 4 years we are living together (as man and wife?).
Our 'sinecure' (nie rozumiem tego) name is Mikołaj. 'Has year end 15 monthly' (tego nawet nie rozumiem). (tu cos brakuje na poczatku, nie piszesz KTO) is very 'is very' (niepotr) similar to his dad , but has 'too my craft union reliability' (tego nie rozumiem) . (musisz napisac KTO) has pretty blue eyes , and blond hair. (musisz napisac kto) is (tu cos brakuje) beloved rascal. (ale kto? musisz napisac) loves cars and 'miscellaneous pills until shell' (tego nie rozumiem). (musisz napisac kto) is very .....'whereas as well still
youngster' (tego nioe rozumiem) . From birth we can not enjoy 'it' (do czego to 'it' sie odnosi - nie wiem).
...Past that not potrafi yet bids , use the following only solitary word , can give us the magnitude of your love.....To zdanie niema sensu, tego nawet nie rozumiem.
(ale KTO?) learns very quickly , (musisz napisac kto) 'is' (niepotr) is really a wise child .
As for me, I will 'not be long to write' (tego nie rozumiem). I'm used to 'maiden ex self-respect' (tego nioe rozumiem).
'I was born in Mikołaj' (nie rozumiem tego) , working on his upbringing .
...When bring to a conclusion school, taking into account luggage vets
work-related ...(tego zdania calkowicie nie rozumiem)
I hope , that 'thighs' (CO? poszukaj to w slowniku) 'me yourselves' (nie rozumiem) find a suitable job , and provide (tu cos brakuje) family stabilization. (alwe KTO? musisz sie nauczyc pisac o kim mowa) made 'a study School Administration' (zla kol slow) , 'by perfect craft' (craft napewno zle slowo, ale nawet nie wiem o czym mowa).
My plans are quite sophisticated ,......,'does' (ale kto, bo tutaj mowisz o 3od.l.poj) not expect much from life , 'wishes' (tutaj napisalas 3os.l.poj, kto to taki?) be 'goods' (zle slowo-to sa towary) parent as well.

He is handsome green-eyed tall and dark-haired.
Since 2003 he HAS BEEN...

podpowiedzialem pytajacej, bo chyba nie poradzilaby sobie ze znalezieniem odpowiednika bruneta

My name is Magda. I'm 25 years old and I was born and bred in Poland. My husband Tom and my son Nick are also a part of my family.
My husband is 26 years old. He is a handsome, tall, green-eyed brunette. He works for the international transport company. He has been working as a professional driver for seven years. He enjoys quiet, family evenings in, going to the cinema and basketball. His greatest features are: honesty, being loyal and hardworking. He is a very good father for our son, and caring husband for me. Not only is he my partner but also my best friend. My family likes him very much. He can always find something to talk about with my parents, grandparents and the rest of the family. We have been a couple for 9 years and married for the last 4 years.
Our son's name is Nick. He is a year and 5 months old. He takes after his father, but has his own, unique features as well. He is blond with pretty blue eyes. He is our cheeky, little monkey. He loves cars and balls. He is lively but he is a good boy. Since he was born we can't stop watching him growing. Although he can't speak yet, he uses only very simple words; he is somehow able to show us his great love. He is learning really fast and he is a clever little boy.
As for me, it doesn't take long to describe myself. I'm just an ordinary, ambitious girl. I have been working on my son's upbringing since he was born. After I had completed school, I gained a lot of professional experience. I hope, that I will be able to find a right job to keep my family on a high enough level. I took up studies at the School of Administration to master my skills. My plans are quite elaborated and I will be consistently working towards fulfilling them. I try not to expect too much from life, I would like to be a good mother and wife. I also hope that at least some of my dreams will fulfill some time in the future.

czy to jest teraz dobrze?

troszke uprosciłam i zmieniłam co nieco , mysle ze dobrze teraz bedzie

Nie, nie jest dobrze. Popraw jeszcze.

He is a handsome, tall, green-eyed 'brunette' (dalej tego nie lubie. Nie wiem co to znaczy po ang - bo wg mnie nic).
He works for 'the' (jak piszesz 'the' to masz na mysli 'ta jedyna' a my nie wiemy o kim mowa, tutaj musisz napisac 'an') international transport company. His greatest features are: honesty, being loyal and 'hardworking' (zla czesc zdania). He is a very good father for our son, and A caring husband for me.
He is 'a year and 5 months old' (lepiej powiedziec 17 months old).
Since he was born we can't stop watching him growing UP.
I hope, that I will be able to find a right job to keep my family on a 'high enough level' (cos tu nie tak...popraw).
I also hope that at least some of my dreams will BE fulfillED AT some time in the future.

napisałam jeszcze jedną pracę ale też nie wiem czy dobrze cały czas się uczę:)

MY FAMILY
My name is Magdalena . I was born and raised in Poland. I live in Legnica. I’m twenty-five years old . I’m a student but I learn only in weekends. I’m small, skinny blond girl with blue eyes. I ‘m interesting in fashion, law and administration. I like dancing, listening to music and meeting with my frends. I love animals, especially cats and dogs. Sometimes I go to the cinema or to the park for a walk. I learn English because it’s an interesting language and I realy need this to find a good job.
I have a very big family. I have parents, grandparents and two oldest brothers. Also I have uncles, aunts and cousins. But I only want to introduce you my own small family. I have a wonderfull husband and a beautifull son. I want to tell you something about them.
First of all I want to introduce my husband. He’s name’s Tomasz. We’ve been together for 9 years and for 4 years we live together as a couple.He’s a handsome and tall dark-haired man with green eyes. He works in an international transport company. Since 2003 he’s been working as a proffesional driver. He likes watching movies in a cinema and playing basketball. He always watch basketball matches in the TV. His greatest features are: honestly, loyality, and assiduity. Also he’s got a good sense of humour. He’s a very good father for our son and exemplary husband for me. He’s not only my life partner, he’s also my best friend. We love spend evenings together. When our son sleeps we have time only for us. We enjoy of each other. My family likes him very much. He can find common topics with my parents, grandparents and the rest of family.
Second of all I want to tell you something about my little son name’s Mikołaj. We called him Miki. He has only 15 months but he’s very wise child. He has blue eyes, blond hair and fantastic smile. Miki is similar to his dad , but has many of my characteristics. Miki is a beloved rascal but also he’s a nice and polite boy. He loves cars and miscellaneous balls to play. From his birth we cannot enjoy of him.He’s our greatest treasure.
I think, that we are very funny people, because we love joking and laughing. We’re spending a lot of time together , then we’re having a lot of fun.
All members of my big family meet at Christmas and other holiday. It;s lovely time for us.
I love all my family very much and I think, that they’re the most important people for me. I cannot imagine a world without them.

jeżeli mam dać ja do szkoły która lepsza pani zdaniem w tej na pewno też są błędy , prosze o pomnoc bo nie mam kogo poprosić: dziękuje z góry

I'm a student but I learn only 'in' AT THE weekends. I'm A small, skinny, blondE girl with blue eyes. I 'm 'interesting' INTERESTED in fashion, law and administration.
I AM learnING English because it's an interesting language and I realy need this to find a good job.
I have parents, grandparents and two 'oldest' OLDER brothers.
But I only want to introduce TO you my own small family. I have a 'wonderfull' WONDERFUL husband and a 'beautifull' BEAUTIFUL son.
'He's' HIS name's Tomasz. We've been together for 9 years and for 4 years we HAVE liveD together as a couple. He's 'a handsome and tall dark-haired' (nie, troche inaczej...he's a tall, dark and handsome) man with green eyes.
Since 2003 he's been working as a 'proffesional' PROFESSIONAL driver.
He always watchES basketball matches 'in' ON the TV.
He's a very good father 'for' TO our son and AN exemplary husband for me.
We enjoy 'of' (niepotr) each other'S COMPANY.
Second of all I want to tell you something about my little son WHOSE 'name's' NAME IS Mikołaj. We 'called' CALL him Miki. He 'has' IS only 15 months OLD, but he's A very wise child. He has blue eyes, blond hair and A fantastic smile. Miki is a beloved rascal, but also he's a nice and polite boy. He loves cars and
miscellaneous balls to play WITH. From his birth we cannot enjoy 'of him' (niepotr) HIM ENOUGH.
All members of my big family meet at Christmas and other holidayS. 'It;s' IT IS A lovely time for us.

A w przyszlosci tez tutaj pisz swoje prace, zawsze poprawimy.