Napisz story o nastolatku, który podczas wycieczki szkolnej uratował kolegów.
Nie śmiać się, bo piszę coś takiego po raz pierwszy... Dobra, nigdy więcej łatwizny;)
During my summer holidays I was camping with my friends at the seaside. When we were going fish, we saw a group of teenagers with a teacher. Boys were swimming in the sea. Girls were lieing on the beach. ''It is usual class trip''- said Mark.
In the evening we saw this same group. They were roasting sausages near the forest.
Suddenly two boys disappeared. The teacher didn' t see this. They were looking forward for do something. ''What happened?'' I and my friend thought.
After that two men carried on a bottle with beer. When they finished drink they wanted to go on a boat. They stole one near the sea. Immedientely one of them slipped and fell to the water. He couldn' t swim and started to sink. While he was under the board, his friend was laughing with him. ''Help me''- he screamed.
When I saw that friend needs help, we wanted to help him.
He drunk too mych but we saw a teenager who was running to him quickly.
He took his couple out with water. He was a hero, because he also took him with a first rescue. In a short time, there came up much people. Somebody called for a ambulance. That was a terrible history but everybody learned very much.
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