holiday

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Holiday is a great time when we can Take Rest and regenerate energy after hard work for year. People most often go on summer break time with their family, friends, more seldom alone. On holiday they meet interesting people and do what they want. They go shopping, visit some monument . If they are on Holiday at the seaside they spend all day on the beach. They sunbath and swim in the sea. If they spend holiday in the mountains they hiking . I spent two weeks of my holiday in Spain in barcelona. It was great. I sunbathed, swam in the sea and visited many interesting places. I think that it was the best holiday in my life. Not everyone go on holiday. More people stay at home. They don’t have enough time or money to go on holiday. But holiday at home can be great too. You can meet with friends and do with them a lot of great things. In my opinion holiday is the best time of the year because we can take rest and do what we want.

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Holiday is a great time when we can Take (brakuje cos) Rest and regenerate (brakuje cos) energy after hard work 'for' (zle slow - poszukaj inne) (brakuje cos) year.
They go shopping, 'visit some monument' (nie, nie tak, napisz 'do some sightseeing) . If they are on (brakuje cos) Holiday at the seaside they spend all day on the beach. They sunbathE and swim in the sea. If they spend (brakuje cos) holiday in the mountains they (brakuje cos) hiking. I spent two weeks of my holiday in 'Spain in barcelona' (alez przeciez Spain nie jest w Barcelonie, ale Barcelona w Spain - popraw).
I think that it was the best holiday 'in' (lepiej OF) my life. Not everyone 'go' (tutaj GOES-3os.l.poj) on holiday.
In my opinion holiday TIME is the best time of the year because we can take (brakuje cos) rest and do what we want.