prosze o sprawdzenie mojego opowiadania o wkacjach

prosiła bym o sprawdzenie mojego opowiadania o wakacjach . Z góry dziękuje :*


This year spent holiday in Italy together with my boyfriend. We was there in July. We had a great time. We saw a lot of beautiful historical buildings the most interesting Colosseum as well as Capitoline Hill. Next, I was on the Saint Peter's Square. And finally rested by the Adriatic Sea and later we spent time in the city. I bought a lot of souvenirs. In Italian restaurant the ate Italian dish , Calzone. It was delicious. This is country is very beautiful. Second month I spent in my house. I read a lot of books and met with my friends. Sometimes I was boring then went to the cinema or listened to music , sometimes went to swimming. I in the evening went to the dancing. The holidays was wonderful.

This year I spent my holiday in Italy with my boyfriend. We were there in July. We had a great time. We saw a lot of beautiful historical buildings. the most interesting was Colosseum as well as Capitoline Hill. Next, I was on the Saint Peter's Square. And finally I rested by the Adriatic Sea and later we spent time in the city. I bought a lot of souvenirs. In Italian restaurant we ate the Italian dish , Calzone. It was delicious. This country is very beautiful. Second month I spent in my house. I read a lot of books and met with my friends. Sometimes I was boring then I went to the cinema or listened to music , sometimes went to swimming pool. In the evening I went to the dancing. The holidays was wonderful.

anja - piszesz bzdury bo jeszcze nie opanowalas przedimkow. O tych to juz mi rece opadaja.

The most interesting was (tu cos brakuje) Colosseum as well as 'Capitoline' (popraw) Hill. Next, I 'was on' (o co tu w ogole chodzi - popraw) the Saint Peter's Square.
In (tu cos brakuje) Italian restaurant we ate the Italian dish Calzone.
Sometimes I was 'boring' (zla czesc mowy) then I went to the cinema or
listened to music, sometimes (ale kto? ja? ty? pies? kot? no kto?) went to (tu cos brakuje) swimming pool. In the evening I went 'to the' (po co to? Calkowicie nie rozumiesz jak sie uzywa przyimki) dancing. The holidays 'was' (dlaczego uzywasz l. poj czasownika jak rzeczownik masz w l.mn - podstawowe bledy) wonderful.