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Przyznam, ze to dotąd mój najtrudniejszy speech do napisania. Wciąż staram się jakoś poprawic swoją znajomość tego języka. Proszę o poprawienie i wytłumaczenie dlaczego tak, a nie inaczej :)
Many Americans and much of the rest of the world are afraid.Since 11 September of 2001,we feeling that we are not safe anymore.How terrorism change ours lifes?

Toda each air travel is a nightmare because We don't feel safe, our security is threatened.Our physical and emotional systems are tarnished.we change our mind about
the Islam and Muslims.The authorities try to ensure our safety.The world have a obsessed of a safety.We can't anymore say about a safety.The peace was broken and we don't know when will be better.

To sum up I think we never can fell free from terrorrism.There will always be someone who will can do something dangerous.We don't know the future so we don'tknow how it will ever.
Jeżeli piszesz np How terrorism change ours lifes?, to może ten poziom jest za trudny dla ciebie.
Tematy speechy sa wybierane przez mojego nauczyciela więc nie mam na nie wpływu, a dopiero od tego roku szkolnego mam cos wspólnego z tym językiem.
"How has terrorism change our lifes?" nie zauważyłam "ours" przedtem
bardzo mi zależy na wytknięciu błędów w tym tekście
how terrorism has*
nie, jak zadajesz pytania w present simple?
Many Americans and much of the rest of the world are afraid ALE CZEGO?.Since 11 September of 2001,we feeling TO JEST W OGOLE NIEGRAMATYCZNE. JAKIEGO CZASU UZYWASZ W ZDANIACH Z SINCE? that we are not safe anymore.How terrorism change ours lifes? OUR - JUZ WIESZ, MOZNA UTWORZYC PYTANIE Z 'HAS', ALE WTEDY MUSISZ ZMIENIC FORME CZASOWNIKA CHANGE. NO I JESZCZE LIVES, BO TO JEST PRAWIDLOWA LICZBA MNOGA

Toda each air travel TRAVEL TO OGOLNIE 'PODROZOWANIE', A NIE KONKRETNA PODROZ is a nightmare because We don't feel safe, our security is threatened.Our physical and emotional systems are tarnished CO TO MIALO ZNACZYC?.we change JAK CZESTO? NA TO WSKAZUJE UZYTY CZAS PRESENT SIMPLE our mindS about
the Islam and Muslims.The authorities try to ensure our safety.The world have HAVE NIE WYSTAPI W 3 OS. L. POJED. a RESZTA ZDANIA JEST NIEGRAMATYCZNA obsessed of a safety.We can't anymore say = MOWIC about a safety.The peace was NIE, PRESENT PERFECT broken and we don't know when BRAK PODNIOTU will be better.

To sum up I think we never can fell =UPADLEM free from terrorrism.There will always be someone who will can NIEGRAMATYCZNE do something dangerous.We don't know the future so we don'tknow how it will ever BRAK CZASOWNIKA.
Many Americans and much of the rest of the world are afraid about their safety.Since 11 September 2001,we have felt that we safe anymore.How terrorism change our lives?

Today each trip by plane is a nightmare because We don't feel safe, our security is threatened.Our physical and emotional systems are undermined(nadszarpnięte).we have been changing our mind about
the Islam and Muslims.The authorities try to ensure our safety.The world has a obsessed with safety.We can't anymore say about a safety.The peace has broke and we don't know when it will be better.

To sum up I think we never can feel free from terrorrism.There always be someone who can something dangerous.We don't know the future so we don'tknow how it will ever be.
have felt that we aren't czy haven't safe anymore(?)
safe to przymoitnik (bezpieczny)
pytanie o terrorism nadal niegramatyczne. Nie potrafisz ukladac pytan.
zdanie z obsessed nadal niezrozumiale
say zle uzyte, safety jest niepoliczalne
zla forma czasownika break w zdaniu z peace
there always be niegramatyczne
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