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In 25 october 2006, my whole class with tutor and mathematics teather were in Olsztyn. Movie "World Trade Center" was main purpose of excursion. Cinema was placed in shopping center Alfa.the movie was true story of Will Jimeno and John McLoughlin, two Port Authority police officers who rushed into the burning World Trade Center on 9/11 to help rescue people, but became trapped themselves when the tower collapsed. A race against time ensued to free them before their air ran out.
After the movie we had 2 hours free time on shopping. Next we gone about 2.30 pm. for castle were was placed museum of Warmia and Masuria.There we Toured museum Mikołaja Kopernika and exhibition Heleny and Juliusza Krajewskiego.
About 5 p.m we move for Pisz.That was fantastic day.

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In (nie in' ale 'on') 25 october 2006, my whole class with THE tutor and mathematics teaCher were in Olsztyn. THE movie "World Trade Center" was THE main purpose of excursion. Cinema was placed (nie placed - a located) in shopping centRE (czy po AmE- wtedy center czy BrE centre) Alfa. THE movie was A true story of ..
After the movie we had 2 hours free time FOR shopping. Next we
gone (nie gone a ...cos innego) about 2.30 pm. TO A castle wHERE THE museum of Warmia and Masuria WAS LOCATED. TheN we toured THE museum OF Mikołaja Kopernika (znajdz jak to sie pisze po ang.) and THE exhibition OF Heleny and Juliusza Krajewskiego (Tak samo, to po ang. Helena and Julian.)

dzięki :)))))

dzięki :)))))

dzięki :)))))