prosze o sprawdzenie

Temat przeniesiony do archwium.
Nareszcie uporałam sie z moim zadaniem, ale nie wiem na ile dobrze. a wiec bardzo prosze o sprawdzenie:
Temat: Dogs shouldn't be kept as pets in big cities.
Dog is the best friends of the men. Many people have got a dog which is their life companion. They live in small villige and big cities. Which pros and cons are being for living in big cities with dogs, whether dogs shouldn't be kept as pets in big cities?
Firstly advantage of keeping dogs as pets in big cities is that they make pleasent our time. We can walk and play with them. In addition, the elderly have a dog (chce napisac, że wypełniają ich pustkę), when their children (nie wiem jak to napisać-wyfruną z gniazdka). They have something with whom may spend a time. Furthermore, dogs teach children to be responsible, which come in useful in their future life.
On the other hand, neigbours will be complain when yours dog will be bark and bay. What is more, in big cities haven't got a place which especially designed for dogs. In addition, dogs which live in block or house in big city, must spend in them a long time when their owner come back from work.
Finally, I think that place where live a dogs is not to worry. It is unimportant that they live in small villige or big city, but it is important that the dog live with our in harmony and amity.
Na pewno popełniłam sporo błedów.Prosze o sprawdzenie. Z góry serdeczne dzięki!!!

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