Prosze o pomoc??!!

Witam! Wczoraj wróciłem z obozu narciarskiego w Karpaczu. Za zadanie dostaliśmy napisać list o tym obozie. Coś tam juz napisałem tylko prosze o poprawe moich wypocin. Widzicie mój angielski nie jest za dobry i z takiego listu pisanego w domu chciałbym dostać dobrą ocene:)

Oto moje wypociny:
Dear Tom

Thanks for your letter. J wrote you when J was to the ski-camp in Karpacz. I stayed in very nice boarding house "Ustronie". I everyday ski becouse the weather was beautiful. The sun was shining all day. J usually get up at 7:30. After we have breakfast and we go to skislope and we come back about 16:30. Later we have dinner and free time. Bedtime was at 12:00. In my room, there were 2 boy without me. They were Maciej and Tomek, my best friends. In spare time we saw the sights church Wang and museum toys. (W wolnych chwilach zwiedzalismy kosciół Wang i muzeum zabawek). We had a very nice time there. The food was quite good. Unfortunately, we hadn't many lesson there. I have very good memories with this camp. I will send you some nice photo next time.
Best wishes KUBA


I to na tyle. Licze że ktoś mi pomorze, z góry dzięki!!!!

Dear Tom,
Thanks for your letter. I'm writing to you just after my coming back from Karpacz, where I was on the ski-camp. I was staying at a very nice, boarding hotel "Ustronie".
I wentskiing everyday, because the weather was beautiful. The sun shined all day long.
I usually got up at 7:30 a.m., after breakfast we went skiing and we came back at about 4:30 p.m (anglicy nie używają godzin od 12 do 24). Later we had dinner and some free time. Bedtime was at midnight. I lived with two other boys - Maciek and Tomek in the same room. They're my best friends. We visited the town in our spare time, we saw the Wang church and the museum of toys. We were having a very nice time here.
The food was quite tasty. Unfortunately we didn't have many lessons here.
My memories of the camp are very good. Next time I will send you some photos of my staying in Karpacz.
Best wishes, Kuba.

M\ybe try this:
Dear Tom,
Thank you for your letter. I am writing this after my return from Karpacz where I went on the ski camp. I stayed at a very nice hostel 'Ustronie'. As the weather was beautiful I went skiing every day. The sun shone all day long. I usually got up at 7.30a.m. After breakfast we went on the ski slopes and returned at 4.30p.m. Later we had dinner and some free time. Bedtime was at midnight. I shared my room with two other boys Maciek and Tomek, who are my best friends. We visited the town in our spare time where we saw the Wang church and the toy museum. We had a very enjoyable time there. The food was quite tasty/delicious. Unfortunately we didn't have many lessons there. I have very good memories of the camp. Next time I will send you some photographs of my visit to/stay at Karpacz.

I co teraz?? Mam dwie wersje i która jest lepsza? Ja to mam problemy. Uff ja to mam...

See what you've started.
Others don't get any help and you get two.