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I think the most important job is a doctor.
In my opinion at present they don't earn enough money.They are working in several places at the same time, therefore they are always late. A lots of them possess own private surgery, because it's pay off. In public health center they takes a few patients a day.
If the young people want to be a doctor, they have to learn o lot. Medicine is very hard to finish, and the studies are very long.In my opinion a person who like to be a doctor must be helpful, hard-working, reliable, kind and determined.
Our life is dependent from doctors. They helpes people, therefore they must exist in the society.
I think the other jobs are less important because it doesn't save people life.
Doctors should earn more money in the public health center. Then they wouldn't have own surgery.
I think the most important job( lepiej byłoby occupation) is the one of a doctor.
>In my opinion at present they don't earn enough money.They are working
>in several places at the same time, therefore they are always late. A
>lots of them possess their own private surgery, because it's pay off. In
>public health center they take in a few patients a day.
>If young people want to become a doctor, they have to learn a lot.
>Medicine is a very hard (subject of studies) to finish, and the studies last very long.In my
>opinion a person who would like to be a doctor must be helpful,
>hard-working, reliable, kind and determined.
>Our life is dependent on/upon doctors. They are helpful people, therefore they
>must exist in a society.
>I think the other jobs are less important because they don't save
>people's life.
>Doctors in the public health center should earn more money. Then they
>wouldn't have to have their own surgery.
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