extreme sports - dlaczego ludzie uprawiają sporty ekstremalne?

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Why do people practice extreme sports ? Which extreme sport is for me ?

Nowadays extreme sports are very popular. People are more and more interested in extreme sports. They don't think about consequences, it's only about the feeling of adrenaline, of freedom… so why do people practice a extreme sports?

First of all, extreme sports can form character. Fans usually fight with their fear while jumping off cliffs, doing cave exploration or storm chasing. By performing such feats they get to know the limits of their courage and can overcome their mental disabilities.

Extreme sports also allow people to take a different and original view on the world.
They are connected with happiness and fear – give more adrenaline. What is more extreme sports give new adventures for us . We also meet a new people which very often are our friends, sometimes are lovers.

When we practice extreme sports we don’t remember about daily problems and we have moment only for us . for example parachute or rock climbing are hobbies which give relaxiation and very often space just for us. Nowadays it’s good for people who are very busy and those who do not have daily time for themself.

If I can change extreme sport for me I think that I will practice a scuba diving. It’s very interesting sport and what is more it’s not as dangerous as parachute. Under the water we can know underwater fauna and flora. In addition we feel freedom, adrenaline and run away from all trouble in our live.

To sum up, extreme sports are more and more popular in our society. It’s good to feel the adrenaline sometimes and don’t forget about our problems. It’s good hobby for contemporary people !

They don't think about (tu brakuje przedimka THE) consequences, it's only about the feeling of adrenaline, of freedom… so why do people practice 'a' (nie dajemy przedimkow przed l. mn -sports) extreme sports?

First of all, extreme sports can form (tutaj mozesz dodac ' a person's) character. Fans (of extreme sports) usually fight with their fear while jumping off cliffs, doing cave exploration or storm chasing.

They are connected with happiness and fear – IN THAT THEY give more adrenaline.
We also meet 'a' (niepotr) new people which very often 'are' (nie, bo dopiero pozniej zostaja friends, trzeba inaczej...'become') our friends, sometimes 'are' (nie, nie tak, daj tutaj EVEN) lovers.

When we practice extreme sports we don’t remember about (brak przedimka) daily problems and we have (tutaj brak przedimka, daj 'A') moment only for us for example parachute or rock climbing are hobbies which give 'relaxiation' (ortog) and very often space just for us. Nowadays it’s good for people who are very busy and those who do not have 'daily' (daj inne slowo, np 'free') time for 'themself.' (nie, nie tak - tutaj ma byc l. mn. THEMSELVES)

If I can 'change' (zle slowo, tutaj myslisz o wybieraniu, poszukaj) extreme sport for me I think that I will practice 'a' (zakochales sie w tym 'a' czy cos - nie uzywaj tego tak czesto, robisz byki) scuba diving. It’s (tutaj brakuje przedimka) very interesting sport and what is more it’s not as dangerous as parachute (ale parachute CO? - bo sam parachute nie jest 'dangerous'). Under the water we can 'know' (poszukaj inne slowo, tutaj najlepiej pasuje - poznac, zauwazyc) underwater fauna and flora. In addition we feel freedom, adrenaline and CAN run away from all (tu brakuje przedimka) trouble in our 'live' (tutaj masz czasownik, a myslisz o rzeczowniku - popraw).

It’s good to feel the adrenaline sometimes and 'don’t' (chyba nie - przeczytaj to jeszcze raz) forget about our problems. It’s (tu brakuje przedimka) good hobby for contemporary people !


A co sie stalo z uzywaniem przedimkow 'a', 'the' - widac ze masz truydnosci z tym. Przerob to jeszcze raz.

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