Proszę o sprawdzenie- cover letter

Jak ktoś ma pomysł na jakieś błyskotliwe sformułowanie, proszę się nie wstydzić.

Dear Mrs. Smith,


I have worked in Morgan, Nike, Nescafe, Huawei as a brand manager and due to my marketing and promotion strategies sale and income tripled in all of them. I have also recently obtained a PHD's Degree in Economics at University of Lodz. I deem I am a perfect candidate for the position of Brand Manager at EMEA Organisation


In my last job as brand manager for Morgan Ltd. I was obligated to implement and design marketing strategy for the Europe. I concetreted mostly on social media and blog e-branding to attract new customers due to the fact that marketing cost objective was very low. In fact the campaign seems to be a great success. Over a three-year period time, income was raising at a 110 percent annual rate.


Nowadays, video games are captivating consumers attention and capturing their wallets. I ensure you, I have the skills, knowledge and abillities to capture market share and optimize EMEA's profitability


I would appreciate an opportunity to present my ideas in more detail at interview,
and I will call you early next week to arrange a meeting. If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me before then. Thank you for your time and consideration. Looking forward to hearing from you.



Respectfully yours,

Dear Mrs. Smith,


I have worked in Morgan, Nike, Nescafe, Huawei as a brand manager, and due to my marketing and promotion strategies, sales and income have tripled in all of these companies. I have also recently obtained a Phd in Economics at the University of Lodz. I believe that I am the perfect candidate for the position of Brand Manager at EMEA Organisation.


In my last job as brand manager for Morgan Ltd., I implemented and designed a new marketing strategy for the whole of Europe. I concentrated mostly on social media and blog e-branding to attract new customers due to the fact that marketing cost budget was very low. The campaign haso been a great success. Over a three-year period, income was raising at a 110 per cent annual rate.


Nowadays, video games captivate consumers' attention and capturing their wallets (nie wiem czy to jest dobre zdanie). I ensure you, I have the skills, knowledge and abillities to capture market share and optimize EMEA's profitability.


I would appreciate an opportunity to present my ideas in more detail at an interview. If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me. Thank you for your time and for taking my application into consideration. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,

piszemy 'as a brand manager' czy 'as brand manager' bo dwie wersje są w tekście? :)

kicken-
widze ze jakos skaczesz w tym letter. Napisz to normalnie, najpierw osiagniecia w nauce, pozniej kariere a pozniej twoje atuty.