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Dear Mrs. Smith,


I have worked in Morgan, Nike, Nescafe, Huawei as a brand manager and due to my marketing and promotion strategies sale and income tripled in all of them. I have also recently obtained a PHD's Degree in Economics at University of Lodz. I deem I am a perfect candidate for the position of Brand Manager at EMEA Organisation


In my last job as brand manager for Morgan Ltd. I was obligated to implement and design marketing strategy for the Europe. I concetreted mostly on social media and blog e-branding to attract new customers due to the fact that marketing cost objective was very low. In fact the campaign seems to be a great success. Over a three-year period time, income was raising at a 110 percent annual rate.


Nowadays, video games are captivating consumers attention and capturing their wallets. I ensure you, I have the skills, knowledge and abillities to capture market share and optimize EMEA's profitability


I would appreciate an opportunity to present my ideas in more detail at interview,
and I will call you early next week to arrange a meeting. If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me before then. Thank you for your time and consideration. Looking forward to hearing from you.



Respectfully yours,