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Living In the countryside and living in the city has also good and bad sides . In my work I would like to introduce advantages and disadvateges of both . I would like to ilustrate the rightness of proverb ‘’God made the country;man made the town’’
In this time many young people choose a city as a place to live because there is more posibilities to find a good paid job . Industrial development is very quick . Free areas are taken by famous company which build there their own factories . Almost in every newspaper we have a lot of advertisements about a work which are tempted for people who desperately seeking some work . If they find one they will decide to stay in a city a little bit longer . In a town we have more opportunites to have fun – cinemas , amusment parks , theatres, shopping centres and lots more . Meeting with friends become more interesting. It is important that there are places where we can go whenever we feel the willing . In a town , there is no place to be bored .
On the other hand , people who live in a town are often tired of urban life . Hearing the car’s noise for almost all day is really oppressing and it can cause for instance depression . It can be the reason for moving to a countryside . Living in the countryside become more and more popular every day . In a countryside we can find a quitness and calmness after long day work . We are surrounded by nature and areas which are free from pollution . Beautiful landscapes are spreaded in front of us . We have here the nature which the man destroyed. The view od happy childern playing on the fresh air is also amazning . Of course there is also some disadvantages like monotony , boredom and difficulties with commutation . The petrol is expensive and for children there is no enough school buses and tickets are also expensive .
To sum up , wherever we decide to live we have to count with some difficulties . It is up to us what we prefer . ‘God made the country;man made the town’-this is so true proverb and I think that I proved it in my essay .