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I couldn’t wait for the day my sister was going to get married. The wedding was supposed to take a place in St.George’s church in our city last summer. That was also the day when I planned to introduce my new boyfriend to the whole my family!
In the morning everything was going well, nevertheless I was pretty nervous – I had to feel that the storm was coming. At first I met my mother who told me, that she invited special guest. I got curious, but she said that this is going to be a surprise – actually my boyfriend Matty was a secret too – only my sister knew about his existence.
Just before the ceremony I talked to my cousins Jane and Amanda as Matty showed up. I grabbed his hand and we went to meet my parents. As we found them my mom was looking forward to me with her surprise: my ex-boyfriend Adam! I was confused and mad at the same time. There wasn’t enough time to say something when my sister called us: the ceremony had begun. Just after the wedding my cousins took me aside and explained one terrible fact - Matty was a cheater - 3 months ago he dated them both at the same time!
By then situation was clear. I immediately broke up with Matty and after all I had a really good time with Adam. Who would imagine that since then we will be back together until now!
to the whole my family ma być to my whole family

she invited A special guest

she said that this WAS going to be a surprise

Jane and Amanda WHEN Matty showed up
wielkie dzięki! :)

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