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Dear Marta,
I write you to inform,that football match,which will take place today was canceled.We can't play,becauce our teacher and several of students are ill.I have request to you for inform all your friends about it.Instead we can play today cards or go for a walk.
See you later,
XYZ.

I (am) 'write' (writing) 'you' (niepotr) to inform (you) ,that (przedimek) football match,which 'will take' (should have taken) place today was 'canceled' (cancelled).We can't play, 'becauce' (because) our teacher and several of students are ill.
'I have request to you for' (Please) inform all your friends about it.
Instead we can play 'today' (niepotr) cards or go for a walk.

Terri, are you on Skype?
It's Merix here :)

Pisałem, że powinnaś powtórzyś tryby warunkowe, dodatkowo powtórz użycie przedimka nieokreslonego i okreslonego. Praktycznie nie używasz ich wcale, co jest powaznym błędem.