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Should we keep big dogs in small flats?

Before I'll try to answer on an essay question, I must point out that I'm an owner of a big dog. We took him when he was 3 months old. We were living in the village in a big house with the garden then. Some time later we had to move out to a small flat in the city.
Living in a small apartment can be tough for dogs. And not only for them - everyone who ever lived in a flat will admit that small space can create aggression and irritation.
Many people think a dog’s size is the only thing that matters when it comes to whether or not city living is possible, but with large dogs, the breed type is really more important. For example, sporting and herding breeds have high activity needs. The owner must handle it. If he can't - his pet will be unhappy. And this will lead to continually bark, agressive behaviour or destruction of the house. That's why the future dog owners should get to know everything about the breed of a dog they want to buy. It is obvious that you can't buy a high-energy Border Collies or Weimaraners when you live in a small flat and you're going to work for 8 hours five days a week. But there're many breeds that may be a particularly good fit for smaller homes, such as Mastiff, Bulldog, Havanese, Pug etc. Such dogs possess laid-back personalities, don’t tend to bark excessively and have low exercise needs.
Owners of the mutt are in pretty worse situation. They mostly don’t know the dog’s ancestors and - as a consequence – they don’t know it’s inborn activity needs. In these circumstances the owner must watch the dog constantly and – if there’s a need – modify it’s environment and life. The same applies to the owners who had to move out from a big house to smaller one.
Anyway, there’re some tips for keeping dogs content in small apartments. Regular exercises (multiple times a day), toys, giving them attention and often teaching new tricks should give your pet happiness and a sense of acceptance. Dogs are social animals and every day they're showing an astonishing ability to be happy in every kind of human environment, from massive ranches to tiny urban apartments. So, if you will follow these tips your dogs should be happy with you even if you don’t have the big house to live.
Back to my introduction, our dog got used to new home very fast. I think that the place he leaves wasn't the most important for him. Every dog wants to spend time with his owners. The place doesn't really matter for them. My four-legged friend isn't an exception. He doesn't care where he lives. He care with whom he lives. And I think that's the main thing to realize: we - as a humans - are one of the biggest dog’s priorities. We shouldn’t forget about it.

Before I'll try to answer 'on' (nie rozumiem co to slowo tutaj robi, ono jest niepotr) 'an' (zly przedimek, tutaj dokladnie wiadomo o co chodzi) essay question, I must point out that I'm an owner of a big dog.
We were living in 'the' (zly przedimek, tutaj nie wiadomo o ktore village chodzi) village in a big house with 'the' (zly przedimek) garden then.
'And' (nie zaczynaj zdania z 'and' poszukaj jaka funkcje to slowo sprawia w zdaniu) not only for them - everyone who ever lived in a flat 'will admit' (to jest za silne, sa niektorzy co tak nigdy nie pomysla) that small space can create aggression and irritation.
Many people think (brakuje slowa 'that') a dog’s size is the only thing that matters when it comes to (tu brakuje slowa) whether or not city living is possible, but with large dogs, the breed type is really more important.
The owner must handle 'it' (nie zaq bardzo rozumiem do czego to 'it' sie odnosi) .
'And' (zmien) this will lead to 'continually' (zla czesc mowy) 'bark' (dokoncz slowo), agressive behaviour or destruction of the house. That's why 'the' (zle slowo, mozesz uzyc 'any') future dog owners should get to know everything about the breed of a dog they want to buy.
But 'there're' (co to jestm napisz to poprawnie) many breeds that may be a particularly good fit for smaller homes, such as Mastiff, Bulldog, Havanese, Pug 'etc' (nigdy nie widzialam breed of dog called etc...).
Owners of 'the' (zly przedimek) mutt are in (brak przedimka) pretty worse situation. They mostly don’t know the dog’s ancestors and - as a consequence – they don’t know 'it’s' (dlaczego piszesz 'it is' - to jest zle) inborn activity needs. In these circumstances the owner must watch the dog constantly and – if there’s a need – modify 'it’s' (dlaczego nie rozumiesz ze piszesz 'it is' zamiast 'its') environment and life. The same applies to the owners who had to move out from a big house to (brak przedimka) smaller one.
Anyway, 'there’re' (napisz to w calosci, to jest zle) some tips for keeping dogs content in small apartments. . Dogs are social animals and every day they're showing an astonishing ability to be happy in every kind of human environment, from massive ranches to tiny urban apartments.
Back to my introduction, our dog got used to new home very 'fast' (quickly). I think that the place he 'leaves' (zostawia? masz tutaj zle slowo, ma byc 'lives) wasn't the most important for him.
He 'care' (he to jest 3 os.l.poj, dostosuj czasownik) with whom he lives. 'And' (popraw) I think that's the main thing to realize: we - as a humans - are one of 'the biggest dog’s' (tu masz arse over tit - one of the dog's biggest) priorities. We shouldn’t forget about 'it' (znajdz inne slowo, moze 'that')

@Jogi,
It is obvious that you can't buy a high-energy Border Collies or Weimaraners
we - as a humans

np
We took him IN when he was 3 months old. lub np bought him, got him etc

The place doesn't really matter for them.

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Before I'll try to answer essay question, I must point out that I'm an owner of a big dog.
We took him in when he was 3 months old.
We were living in a village in a big house with large garden then. Some time later we had to move out to a small flat in the city.
Living in a small apartment can be tough for dogs. Not only for them – almost everyone who ever lived in a flat will say that small space can create aggression and irritation.
Many people think that a dog’s size is the only thing that matters when it comes to deciding whether or not city living is possible, but with large dogs, the breed type is really more important. For example, sporting and herding breeds have high activity needs. The owner must handle. If he can't - his pet will be unhappy. This will lead to continual barking, agressive behaviour or destruction of the house. That's why any future dog owners should get to know everything about the breed of a dog they want to buy. It is obvious that you can't buy a high-energy dog, like a Border Collie or Weimaraner when you live in a small flat and you're going to work for 8 hours five days a week. But there are many breeds that may be a particularly good fit for smaller homes, such as Mastiff, Bulldog, Havanese or Pug.
Owners of a mutt are in a pretty worse situation. They mostly don’t know the dog’s ancestors and - as a consequence – they don’t know its inborn activity needs. In these circumstances the owner must watch the dog constantly and – if there’s a need – modify its environment and life. The same applies to the owners who had to move out from a big house to a smaller one.
Anyway, there are some tips for keeping dogs content in small apartments.
Back to my introduction, our dog got used to new home very quicky. I think that the place he lives wasn't the most important for him. Every dog wants to spend time with his owners. The place doesn't really matter for them. My four-legged friend isn't an exception. He doesn't care where he lives. He cares with whom he lives. I think that's the main thing to realize: we - as human – are one of the dog's biggest priorities. We shouldn’t forget about that.

Zmieniłam trochę fragmenty, które mi "nie leżały". Co myślicie?
1) For example, sporting and herding breeds have high activity needs. The owner must meet that needs. If he can't - his pet will be unhappy.
2) Every dog wants to spend time with his owners. It doesn’t matter to him where he lives (Mam problem z tym zdaniem. Nie pasuje mi. Może ktoś ma jakiś pomysł jak je wygładzić? A może się czepiam? Jeżeli piszę o "every dog" to czy używanie w następnym zdaniu 3 os l.poj jest właściwe?)
3) I think that's the main thing to realize: we are human beings, so we are one of the dog's biggest priorities. We shouldn’t forget about that.

must meet that needs.
It doesn’t matter to him where he lives. No właśnie 'matter to him a nie for him'
we are human beings, so we are one of the dog's biggest priorities. hmmm
Ja bym używał l.mn np w zdaniach (o psach w ogólnym sensie)
All dogs want to be with their owners. They don't care where they live. Wtedy będzie gender neutral bo nie każdy pies jest "he"

I must point out ? mówi tak ktoś ? moze i tak ale ja tak bym nie dał .. zmusza cię ktoś do wskazania na cos ,czy robisz to ,bo chcesz/ chciałbyś ??? ' I would like to point out ../ let me point it out, that ....

'And' (nie zaczynaj zdania z 'and' poszukaj może była taka zasada jak terri chodziła do szkoły, w tysiąc osiemset którymś tam roku :-))))

...Tak, zaczynanie zdania od ' and" nie jest najlepszym pomysłem, podobnie jak ' Because ...bardzo często nadużywane słowo )

Okej, bardzo serdecznie dziękuję Wam za pomoc. Wklejam (mam nadzieję) ostateczną już wersję. Oczywiście, jeżeli wyłapiecie jeszcze coś - BARDZO Was proszę o uwagi, bo naprawdę chcę, by było to mega dopieszczone.

Should we keep big dogs in small flats?

Before I'll try to answer the essay question, I would like to point out that I'm an owner of a big dog. We took him in when he was 3 months old. We were living in a village in a big house with large garden then. Some time later we had to move out to a small flat in the city.

Living in a small apartment can be tough for dogs. Not only for them – almost everyone who ever lived in a flat will say that small space can create aggression and irritation.

Many people think that a dog’s size is the only thing that matters when it comes to deciding whether or not city living is possible, but with large dogs, the breed type is really more important. For example, sporting and herding breeds have high activity needs. The owners must meet their needs. If they can't - their pets will be unhappy. This will lead to continual barking, agressive behaviour or destruction of the house. That's why any future dog owners should get to know everything about the breed of a dog they want to buy. It is obvious that you can't buy a high-energy dog, like a Border Collie or Weimaraner when you live in a small flat and you're going to work for 8 hours five days a week. But there are many breeds that may be a particularly good fit for smaller homes, such as Mastiff, Bulldog, Havanese or Pug. Such dogs possess laid-back personalities, don’t tend to bark excessively and have low exercise needs.

Owners of a mutt are in a pretty worse situation. They mostly don’t know the dog’s ancestors and - as a consequence – they don’t know its inborn activity needs. In these circumstances the owner must watch the dog constantly and – if there’s a need – modify its environment and life. The same applies to the owners who had to move out from a big house to a smaller one.
Anyway, there are some tips for keeping dogs content in small apartments. Regular exercises (multiple times a day), toys, giving attention and teaching new tricks should give all pets happiness and a sense of acceptance. Dogs are social animals and every day they're showing an astonishing ability to be happy in every kind of human environment, from massive ranches to tiny urban apartments. So, if every dog owner will follow these tips, his dog should be happy with him even if he doesn’t have the big house to live.
Back to my introduction, our dog got used to new home very quicky. I think that the place he lives wasn't the most important for him. All dogs want to be with their owners. They don’t care where they live. My four-legged friend isn't an exception. He doesn't care where he lives. He cares with whom he lives, because dogs are a man's best friend. I think that's the main thing to realize: we are human beings, so we are one of the dog's biggest priorities. We shouldn’t forget about that.

..I do not quite get it :(

....right ,going right back to what I was meant to ...

Czyli Going right back to what I was meant to, our dog got used to new home very quicky?
A może:
Anyway, our dog got used to new home very quicky. (nie jestem pewna czy to pasuje)

Regular exercise. Jakby psy robiły brzuszki, przysiady, pompki, podciągania itp itd to wtedy byłyby exercisES.
Owners of muttS (pisałem już o tym)

Jak ma byc takie mega dopieszczone to zamiast pretty worse daj much worse, oraz man's best friend bez przedimka