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I had gone to home at 6p.m with my friends and my boyfriend. Later we were playing in Monopolly and we were eating a kebab. Now I’m making a bed and going to have a shower. And you? How your day?

Later we were playing in Monopolly and we were eating a kebab TYLKO JEDEN?.

why not? It reminds of that spaghetti scene in Lady and the Tramp.

Now I’m making a bed and going to have a shower. TU MOŻE BYĆ BŁĄD
How your day? BRAK CZASOWNIKA 'BE'

I had gone to home at 6 p.m.
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I got home at 6 p.m.

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