Krótkie wypracowanie do sprawdzenia ! ! ! PILNE !

Wypracowanie to ma byc w mowie zaleznej :>
Pewnie narobilem mase bledow :( wiec gdyby ktos mogl to po mnie troszke poprawic bylbym bardzo wdzięczny :D



The reporter said me that the previous day in Bangladesh had been hit by heavy rains. He said me that he was seeing a very serious flooding and a lot of people made homeless. Besides he said that he had seen a people died in a different places. Reporter said me that he wos witness a animales drowned but he said me that he can't to help them :>
He said me that he wos witness a clumsy test of help rescue workers , and he said me that he wos heard a desperated someone voise that someone told " I've lost everything"


raz jeszce bardzo prosze o korekte tego zadania i moze jakies jego urozmaicenie :)

z gory bardzo dziękuje i pozdrawiam wszystkcih :D

The reporter TOLD me that on the previous day --- Bangladesh had been hit by heavy rains. He TOLD me that he was seeing a very serious flooding and a lot of people made homeless. Besides he said that he had seen ---people who had died in --- different places. THE reporter TOLD me that he was a witness as animales were drowning but he ADDED that he cOULDN't --- help them :> rnHe TOLD me that he had witnessed/seen a clumsy test of help rescue workers , and also said that he had heard someone's desperate voice saying: " I've lost everything"

The reporter said TO me (albo "told me" albo "said that") that the previous day in Bangladesh THERE had been A (chociaż nie wiem czy "a" mogę stawiać przed deszczem) heavy rain. He said TO me that he HAD SEEN a very serious flooding and a lot of people HAD BEEN made homeless. Besides, he said that he had seen ("a" przed liczbą mnogą?) people DYING in (znowu przed liczbą mnogą?) different places. Reporter said TO me that he HAD HAD SEEN DROWNING ANIMALS but he (i tak już jest za dużo powtórzeń) HAD NOT BEEN ABLE to help them.
He said that he (nie "wos" tylko "was" jeśli już, ale to stosujemy inny czas) HAD witnessED a clumsy test of help rescue workers, and that he HAD heard A desperated voiCe OF SOMEONE SAYING " I've lost everything"

The reporter said {to} me that the previous day Bangladesh had been hit by heavy rains. He said {to} me that {very serious flooding was seen by him} and a lot of people {were} made homeless. Besides, he said that he saw a lot of people {killed} in different places. The reporter said {to} me that he {witnessed} some animals {drowning} but he said {to} me that he {couldn't help} them. He said {to} me that he {witnessed} clumsy {attempts by the rescue workers} to help {the people}, and he said {to}me that {someone's desperate voice was heard} saying "I've lost everything".

One remark:
There are too many 'said to me' expressions. Try changing them into 'told me', 'added that', 'went on to add that' in some places.

...very serious flooding was seen by him - moze lepiej - he saw very serious flooding and that a lot of people had been made homeless.
mozna tez uzyc:
he reported, expressed, indicated, quoted, uttered, stated,