prośba o małą pomoc

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witam mam nie taką małą prośbę jaką napisałem w temacie lecz jednak bardzo mi jest potrzebna. Sprawa dotczy tekstu. Czy mogłby mi ktos go zprawdzić pod względem stylistycznym i gramatycznym?? Tekst dotyczy muzyki a nie cyklu rozwojowego pleśniaka więc może ktoś się pokusi pozdrawiam. Oto ten tekst:

I want to talk about famous and very successful group Coldplay.
This is group from Great Britain. They play alternative rock.
Their group characterize vocalist’s chant, uncommon lyrics and
original tone of rock. Coldplay have given name cult band :
They have been selling 10 million CD’s, unbelievable concerts in USA
and a lot of success in music trade. Everything started in a college. Idea for create
band arose when Chris Martin (vocalist) and John Buckland (guitar) created first
lyrics. Shortly then joined them Guy Berryman (bass guitar) and the last one in their group
Will Champion (percussion). He have never supposed that he will be play in a band on the other instrument. Now he is versatile musician. The first album whereby they became famous was “The Blue Room.” But the best CD baked in 2000. That was “Parachutes”. In seven days that record sold in 7 million effort. They got many prizes inter alia 2 prizes Brit Awards in 2001, nomination to Mercury Music Prize and finally prize Grammy for “Parachutes” for the best alternative album. The Coldplay burned also 2 other disks. “A rush of blood to the head” and “X&Y”. For “A rush a blood to the head” they got also prize Grammy. Presently I listen sons from “X&Y” and I want recommend this group. I have a hope that this band will stay in music market because in the world are cruising hearsay about breakup of group.
...about A famous and...
This is A group from.....
They have sold 10 million, CD, have performed in unbelievable concerts in the USA and generally have had grate success in the music trade.
The idea for creation fot he band started in college, when Chris Martin... composed the first lyrics. Shortly then they were hoined by Guy....
Giy had never anticipated that he would play in the band...
...first album by which they became famous....
...best CD was made in 2000.
They got - (nie lubie tego) They achieved many prizes ,....were nominated for the Mercury....
burned - (zle slowo) produced 2 other discs. (Disk-slownictwo w IT)
Currently, I am listening to songs from 'X&Z' and I strongly want to recommend this group. I hope that this band .... because there are rumours circulating about the breakup of the band.
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