Czy to jest dobrze ;p??

Temat przeniesiony do archwium.
The name of my website is "Films" and it's about my favourite films. If you like this, you should visit my site. On the home page there's an introduction and a map of the website. This will help you to find everything you need.
On other pages you'll find a lot of films, biography actors and some interviews with directors. There are section with news about films and headlines with life actors. On some of these pages there are video, photos and forum where you will talk with other people.
Finally, you'll find links different actors websites, there are also links to a few fan clubs and interesing facts about films star and award films. I'm sure you'll enjoy the site. Please visit soon! :)

Czy ja to dobrze napisałam prosze o spr. błędów ;* pozdrawiam
...On {the} other pages you'll...
...films, {biographies of actors}...
...There are {sections} with {lives of}...
...there are {videos}, photos and {a} forum...
...you'll find links {to} different {actors'} websites...
...facts about {film stars} and {prizewinning} films.
biography actors -> to będzie jakoś inaczej
There are section -> There are sectionS
there are video -> there are videoS
where you will talk with other people -> where you CAN talk with other people
you'll find links different actors websites -> you'll find there some links to different actors' websites
about films star -> about films starS

W pracy tej jest za dużo powtórzeń, głównie z "website".
>about films star -> about films starS
Poprawka typu:"z deszczu pod rynnę"...
Niepotrzebnie 'stworzyłaś' l.mn.>film -->films
Chodzi przecież o gwiazdy filmowe, a więc słowo:film pełni tu rolę przymiotnika i jako taki nie przyjmuje l.mnogiej:)

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