Bardzo prosze o sprawdzenie :)

Bardzo prosze o sprawdzenie. Myslicie ze jest tam wiecej niz 200 wyrazów..Mam nadzieje :)
Jakbyscie chcieli cos dodac, lub to urozmaicic to bardzo prosze ;]
Z góry dzieki za sprawdzanie.

Hello Anna!
How are you? I’m sorry I haven’t written for ages, but I was very busy. The school has started so I have to learn a lot....I want to tell you something about my holidays.
Unfortunately the holidays passed...It was a fantastic time! Lucily, the weather was perfect, so I could go sunbathing to the beach. I have a wonderful suntan! I met a lot of interesting people and experienced a “summer love”...In the evenings I went to discos and danced to the daybreak!
I was on summer camp, too. Several people from our school went to Solina. It’s a very beutiful place! We were hikking a lot...I saw many interesting places such as Lwów. I will remember the scene of Solina to the end of my life! I’m sure that I will come back there. I was in room with my three friends. We were laughing and had fun, particularly when Asia were joking! She’s so funny! You have to meet her!
I also was in Zakopane with my family. We visited Krakow, Warsaw, Łodz...We stayed in Slovakia for couple of days. When we were going home, we had some problems with our car, but happily reached Mielno.
I’ve got a news for you. My brother had engaged! I can hardly wait to wedding!
Did you enjoy your visit in Spain? Tell me more about it, please. Are you still playing piano? How is your sister? And how about your brother? Did he find a job?
Anyway I have to finish now. Give regards to your family and tell them that I miss them very much!
Keep in touch.

Love,
Julia

Jeżeli o mnie chodzi to wszystko jest OK. Sprawdziłam już wiele prac z angola w tym oczywiście całe mnóstwo listów i jest to ten z wyższej półki. Ale oczywiście wszystko zalezy od stylu Twojego anglisty.

Hello Anna!
How are you? I'm sorry I haven't written for ages, but I [was] HAVE BEEN very busy. The school has started so I have to [learn] STUDY a lot....I want to tell you something about my holiday.
Unfortunately the holiday passed...It was a fantastic time! LucKily, the weather was perfect, so I could go sunbathing [to] ON the beach. I have a wonderful suntan! I met a lot of interesting people and experienced [a] “summer love"...In the evenings I went to discos and danced to the daybreakS!
I was on A summer camp, too. Several people from our school went to Solina. It's a very beAutiful place! We were hik[k]ing a lot...I saw many interesting places such as Lwów. I will remember the sceneRY of Solina to the end of my life! I'm sure that I will [come back] GO there AGAIN. I was in A room with my three friends. We were laughing and had fun, particularly when Asia [were] WAS joking! She's so funny! You have to meet her!
I also was in [OK, ALE LEPIEJ 'WENT TO'] Zakopane with my family. LATER [JESLI NIE NAPISZESZ 'LATER' TZN. ZE WIDZIALAS TE MIASTA W ZAKOPANEM] we visited Krakow, Warsaw AND Łodz...We stayed in Slovakia for A couple of days. When we were going home, we had some problems with our car, but happily WE reached Mielno.
I've got a news for you. My brother had engaged! I can hardly wait [to] UNTIL THE wedding!
Did you enjoy your visit in Spain? Tell me more about it, please. Are you still playing piano? How is your sister? And how about your brother? Did he find a job?
Anyway, I have to finish now. Give MY regards to your family and tell them that I miss them very much!
Keep in touch.

Love,
Julia

I'll refrain from comments.

evika4801 (gosc)
Ale nie bylo OK wg innych osob tutaj na forum.

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...I've got a news for you. My brother's GOT engaged! I can hardly wait ...