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Rozprawka na temat:adventages and disadventages of living in cities.


Have you ever wondered whether living in city is better?Opinions are divided.It may seem,at first,that it is, but further consideration shows that it also has negative effects.
On the positive side living in city is more comfortable and attractive.There are a lot of huge shops,cinemas,theaters,cosy and original cafes and restaurants.People have incredibly big choice what to do in free time.Consequently it is easier to find a good, well-paid job.Moreover young people have more opportunity.They can learn in a prestigious schools and universities.
On the other hand living in city have a lot of disadventages.The streets are full of cars and busses which polluted the enviroment and makes horribly noise.What is more this is very bad for our health.
Another problem is famous rat race.People in cities ale always busy and stressed.They want to earn a huge amount of money but they even haven't time to spend it.Moreover people don't have time for family and friends.They seems to be faceless.
On balance, it appears that cities have as many adventages as disadventages.The decission of whether to live in a city or not remains a matter of personal choice.

wheter living in the city is better or not...more opportunities..make horrible noise...they seems to be faceless (jakiś rzeczownik by sie po faceless przydał-ja bym zmienila nieco to zdanie)

Pamietam, jak to pare dni temu poprawialam, moze skorzystasz z wyszukiwarki-Rozprawka na temat: advAntages and disadvAentages of living in cities.
Have you ever wondered whether living in city is better (better than what? flying to the moon?)
theaters - czy piszesz w AmE czy BrE?
...incredibly big (nie big, a large) choice OF what to do in THEIR free time.
Moreover young people have more opportunitIES.They can learn in a (a jest niepotrz)prestigious...
On the other hand living in city haS a lot of disadvAntages.(Dlaczego piszesz w sposob ktory sie wymawia to slowo- a nie tak jak ma byc?) The streets are full of cars and busses which polluTE the enviroNment and make horriblE noise.
Another problem is THE famous rat race. They want to earn a huge amount of money but they HAVEN'T EVEN GOT time to spend it. Moreover people don't have time for THEIR family and friends.
...advAntages as disadvAntages. The deciSion of whether to live in a city or not
remains a matter of personal choice. (widze, ze to jest zdanie ktore ja pisalam, chyba pozyczyles?)