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When I was a small girl I used to live with my grandparents. They have lived in the little beautiful village which was surrounded by many trees.
I remember when I was 3 years old the tea, which was prepared by my grandfather scaled me and I don’t remember what happened and what was after this accident. But my grandmother told me this horrible story.
I was very thirsty and I asked my grandfather to make me something to drink. Later he put the tea on the table. First of all I was too small and I couldn't reach to the table. First I pulled napkin and then it fell down straight on me.
Grandmather drow me to hospital. I didn't stay here because I felt good. When I came home all family were waiting for me. My grandma conducted me straight to bed and gave me something to drink but not tea. And after when I slept someone must stey with me because I had nightmare. They harassed me still for what I was sad and I didn’t want play.
After everything it had returned to norm: I ran, I laugh and I player with Rother kids. But I dont’ like neither tea nor hot drinks from that time.

>When I was a small girl I used to live with my grandparents. They
>have (bez have) lived in the little beautiful village (szyk zdania - in a beautiful small/little village), which was surrounded by many trees.

I remember when I was 3 years old the tea. (I REMEMBER, LIKE NOTHING ELSE, A TEA) prepared by my grandfather. IT HAPPENED WHEN I WAS ABOUT THREE. I don't know (ALL DETAILS, BUT WHAT I KNOW FOR SURE) was that THE TEA SOMEHOW FELL DOWN ON ME LEAVING MY STATE OF MIND PASSING OUT/FADING AWAY). I couldn't recall what had happened after the accident took place until one day my grandmother told me such a horrible story.

>I was very thirsty and I asked my grandfather to make me something to
>drink. (tu małe rozwinięcie by sie przydało - np co powiedział dziadek i tak dalej) NEXT, he put the tea on the table (tu również np w jakim miejścu dziadek postawił herbate..). First of all I was too
>small (SHORT) and I (można opuścic 'I') couldn't reach to (bez to) the table. First, I pulled napkin and
>then it (THE TEA) fell down straight on me.
>Grandmather drow (DROVE/TOOK))me to hospital. I didn't stay here because I felt
>good. (to zdanie jest złe pod względem semantycznym - treść)I didn't stay long there because being on the proper mend I got over it quite quickly. When I came home all MEMBERS OF MY family were waiting for me. My grandma
>conducted (CARRIED/TOOK/HELPED ME TO GET TO BED) [me straight to bed] and gave me something to drink but not
>tea.(BUT IT WASN'T A TEA) And after when (SOON AFTER, ) WHEN I DROPPED OFF, THERE WAS ALWAYS SOMEONE who would stay with me. I KNEW I WAS IN GOOD HANDS). THEY KEPT LOOKING AFTER ME. WHEN I HAD NIGHTMARES THEY WERE AT HAND AND I COULD COUNT ON THEM BY ALL MEANS. EVERY TIME I WAS SAD THEY WERE CHEERING ME UP.

>After everything (FINALLY,) (I had returned to normal life). I ran, I laugh and I player (PLAY)
>with Rother'S kids. But I dont' like neither tea nor hot drinks from
>that time. (proponowołbym inne zakończnie) np. coś o tym ze po takich cięzkich przeżyciach nie pijasz żadnych gorącch napoji ....) inwencje twórczą pozostwiam tobie.

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co tutaj sie dzieje? - ludzie zaczynaja nowe watki, z tymi samymi zadaniami - wiem, ze dla niektorych to trudno jest przeczytac wszystkie watki, ale sprawdzanie tego samego przez inne osoby to tylko utrata czasu.
p.s. jest przyjete w jez ang. ze girls sa 'little' a boys sa 'small'.