Can you help me,please?

Witam,bardzo Was proszę o sprawdzenie i korektę.
niestety z tym językiem mam trochę kłopotów,toteż proszę Was o pomoc,i dziękuję

You are every summer for me and every storm in the my world.
And I'll be you angel
You joy,sorrow,miserable.
I'll be star in the your sky.
I'll be always by you

Please you accept my apologies once again.
That's only souvenir.

You are every summer for me and every storm in 'the' (dlaczego napisalas 'the' przed my?) my world.
And I'll be youR angel
YouR (you to znaczy ty) joy, sorrow, 'miserable' (MISERY).
I'll be THE star in 'the' (dlaczego wpisujesz 'the' tam gdzie to nie nalezy) your sky.
I'll 'be always' (I'll always be by your side) by you

You are every summer for me,
And every storm in my world.
You're my joy, you're my sorrow.
I'll always be a star in your sky.
I'll be present by your side for ever.
Please do accept my apologies once again.
That's the only gift I can bear.

...be the brightest star in my sky... would definitely be betta

'betta' - jakie to slowo jest engee30? kochanie, nie, nie, lepiej BETTER

I can't help it, I'm afraid. The colloquial language increasingly appeals to me... Most of the people I spend my time with use such expressions, so I can't be bothered saying ordinary words in their company... I want to be like them all, you know! That's why I've decided to use colloquialisms as often as possible, even here, at the forum! :-}

engee30,
A better idea would be to use standard English and put the colloquial (if that's what you want to call this - to me it's just slovenly, but no matter) in brackets. There is a great deal of difference between the acceptable standard of written English and the way it is used on the streets. Here, on the forum, we must be sure to set a good example - let people learn the Standard first, and then they can do with it what they will.

Thanks a lot for a help!!!
dziękuję Wam na wstępie napisałam,że mam trudności
z opanowaniem tego języka,ale wciąż szlifuję
Dzięki:D