błagam sprawdzi mi ten tekscik

If I left Poland I would miss my family, traditional cousine and my friends.
When I go to another country I would left in Poland my family, which I love and which supports me in every circumstances. Certainly, I would miss this.
Polish meals would be my greatest longing. Our bigos, rosół and so on is the best food in the world.
My friends... Maybe they would left Poland with me? But even if not, there are still letters, telephones and planes. However I would miss them very much too.
I wouldn't miss Poland because I don't like Polish lifestyle.
I know that it is not compliant with duties I owe my fatherland, but I really feel it this way.
I would move to every place in which I will feel good, and I would visit my Polish longings as often as I will be able.


poprawiajcie błędy. błagam. czekam na propozycje zmian. naprawde tego potrzebuje

If I left Poland I would miss my family, friends, and Polish food.
I really love my family and they have always been there for me so I am sure I would miss them a lot.
Polish food is something I would probably miss the most. I think that dishes such as bigos, rosol, etc. are the most delicious food in the world.
My friends - maybe they would go with me? But even if they would not, there are still letters, phones and planes so we can keep in touch. Nevertheless, I would miss them a lot, too.
One thing I would not miss is my country. It is because I do not like the Polish lifestyle (what exactly do you mean by that?)
I know that it shows my lack of allegiance to the home country but that is how I really feel about it.
If I left Poland I would move to any place where I would feel good and I would visit my family and friends as often as possible.

wielkie dzieki helper!!! dostałem piatke za tą twoją wersje.

Being a helper - I'm always glad to help... :-)

Dear XYZ,

Thank you for your letter! How are you? I hope you are well.
Yesterday when I was reading newspaper I sow publication respecting health freaks camp. Notice very enjoy me and I decide that I will go in for camp. I can’t come by!
Camp will be organize in France. I leave on Friday. I stay in two weeks.
The day we start an exercise in gym, follow by cycling. Next to breakfast we will be go jogging and play basket-ball, then we will be swimming. Next to diner we will be sail. Next to supper we will be throw the hammer.
When I go to the camp I meet interesting people. For certain I stay fit. I well can see town. I practiced language. When I go to France my dream come true. I will be fluky...

Give my love to XYZ

All the best XYZ




no jakbys mogl tez mi sprawdzic:) prosze...:) wiem jest duzo bledow prosze o pomoc:)

oj, moze lepiej napisz po Polsku, bo szczerze mówiąc strasznie dużo błedów i czasami nie wiem w ogóle co chciałaś napisać np "obok kolacji będziemy rzuceni młotkiem' :)))

wczoraj kiedy czytalam gazete znalazlam ogloszenie dotyczace obozu dla entuzjastow zdrowego stylu zycia.
ogloszenie bardzo mi sie spodobalo i postanowilam ze pojade na ten oboz. nie moge sie juz doczekac!
oboz zostal zorganizowany we francji. wyjezdzam w piatek. bede tam dwa tygodnie.
dzien zaczynamy od cwiczen na sali gimnastycznej, nastepnie bedziemy jezdzic na rowerze. po sniadaniu bedziemy biegac i grac w koszykowke albo plywac. po obiedzie bedziemy zeglowac. po kolacji bedziemy zucac mlotem :)
kiedy pojade na oboz poznam interesujacych ludzi. utrzymam dobra kondycje fizyczna. bede mogla zwiedzic miasto. poznam lepiej jezyk. kiedy pojade do francji spelni sie moje marzenie. bede szczesliwa...


wielkie dzieki za pomoc w napisaniu tego listu jak chcesz to pozmieniaj troche... jeszcze raz dzieki

Yesterday while I was reading a newspaper I came across an advertisement concerning a camp for healthy lifestyle enthusiasts.
The advert was so appealing to me that I decided to enroll!. I'm so much looking forward to it.
Tha camp was organized in France. We're setting off on Friday and I'm going to stay there for two weeks.
We are to start the day with exercise in the gym and cycling. Then comes breakfast followed by running, playing basketball or swimming; dinner followed by sailing and finally hammer throw shortly after supper.

This camp will give me a chance to meet new people, keep fit, sightsee the town, get to know the language .. all at the same time.

Visiting France will make my dreams come true. I'll be happy...

dodam, ze pisalam to ok 1.30 :)) wiec warto by wziać poprawkę....ale jest ok