Mam ogromną prośbę..

Czy mógłby mi ktoś sprawdzić moją pracę?? Byłabym ogromnie wdzięczna...

I’m sitting in school cloakroom. I’m alone...I hear a lot of voices around me. I see tens of faces, but i don’t recognize anybody. In my head there is only one face...Face of person, who was with me all the time, day by day. I can talk with her about everything. She always console me, advise me and she never disappointed me. Now she’s lying on the bed in the near hospital. She can’t say any words, her eyes are full of tears. She don’t want to die...She want to live, enjoy to being with her family. I’m trying not think about this, because I;m so sad that I break into tears. I don’t want to anybody see that I’m crying. In a moment somebody will come here. We’ll start a conversation about nothing, we’ll be laughing when someone will tell a stupid joke...And somebody comes..I’m not alone..So thats all for now. I’ll write more later...

I'm sitting in school cloakroom. I'm alone...I (CAN) hear a lot of voices around me. I (CAN) see tens of faces, but I don't recognize anybody. There is only one face IN MY HEAD... THE Face of THE person who was with me all the time - day by day. I can talk with her about everything. She always consoleS me, adviseS me and she HAS never disappointed me. Now she's lying on the bed in the near hospital. She can't say any word, her eyes are full of tears. She doESn't want to die...She wantS to live, enjoyS being with her family. I'm trying not TO think about this, because I'm so sad (that) I break into tears. I don't want ANYBODY TO see that I'm crying. In a moment somebody will come here. We'll start a conversation about nothing, we'll be laughing when someone HAS TOLD a stupid joke...And somebody comes..I'm not alone..So that's all for now. I'll write more later...

I'm sitting in A school cloakroom.

hmmm..a dlaczego w tych zdaniach ma być użyte CAN, bo nie bardzo rozumiem...: "I (CAN) hear a lot of voices around me. I (CAN) see tens of faces, but I don't recognize anybody."

roznica : I see (rozumiem)/ I can see (widze)

>hmmm..a dlaczego w tych zdaniach ma być użyte CAN, bo nie bardzo
>rozumiem...:

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"mg 18 Sty 2009, 20:57 odpowiedz
'I can see' to British English"

CAN napisałem w nawiasie - opcjonalne użycie

ahaa..dziękuje bardzo za pomoc;)

I jeszcze gdyby ktoś mógł spojrzeć na to:

“It’s over”...she was repeating these words all the time when I was standing by her bad. I had tears in my eyes, but I didn’t cry. I stopped myself. Death..she will comes for everyone. Everybody must to die.. we just don’t know when it’ll happen. How easy to say that, but harder is come to terms with death of person, who was very important for you..
Though she doesn’t go away yet, I feel some kind of anxiety. Maybe it’s not over yet..maybe death will to bypass her and will come another day. I hope so. I can’t imagine my life without her. I hope that someday she’ll smile and enjoy her life again. But whether it’ll be frank and real happiness? Pain, suffering, sympathy, addiction from other people and conscience that the end is very close…Who can be really happy in that situation?
I just know that I want for her everything what is the best. But only You know what is the best for her..so God, please, help her…I want that she never feel pain anymore, I want to she achieves happiness (whatever it means for he).

to miało być: (whatever it means for she).

jejku to było jeszcze inaczej "her" a nie "she"...