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More and more people say that it is better to study abroad than in Poland. Write a composition about it providing arguments for and against

A lot of people have been decided to study abroad. It seems to me they are convinced that their education will be better in other country than Poland. I would like to show advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad.
Firstly, if you don’t afraid of talking in foreign language and you are good on it, an arrival abroad is a good way to get more and more language skills. The majority of students came back home and speak fluently with a great accent. Nowadays, that kind of knowledge is very important and useful.
However, the studying abroad is as a new experience of their life. Students have a chance to live in different way without family and old friends. They certainly meet a lot of people who can become new friends ( and even lover?!). Relationships are very needed for young adults and we shouldn’t forget about it.
On the other hand, In Poland there are a lot of good universities which are recognizable in Europe and other peaces of the world. Polish graduates are very often employed by foreign companies. We have got an education in high standard.
Moreover, much cheaper is studying in the homeland. The polish prices and salaries are different than in for example the western Europe. It caused that a lot of people don’t have enough money for the living there.
To sum up, studying abroad and in Poland has got the better and worse sides. Everybody should knows that we have the great universities with an old tradition. But everybody has got dreams and the most important is that we should realize them.

"of talking in foreign language" - speaking foreign....
"an arrival abroad is a good way to get more and more language skills" - living abroad,
"The majority of students came back home and speak fluently" - come,
"...studying abroad is as a new experience..." - bez 'as',
"They certainly meet a lot of people"- po co to 'certainly' w tym zdaniu ?
"Relationships are very needed for young adults" dziwnie to brzmi w ogóle,
"other peaces of the world" - places,
"The polish prices and salaries are different than in for example the western Europe" ja bym 'the' wywaliła z tego zdania,
"It caused that a lot of people don’t have enough money for the living there" - a lot of sudents from Poland can not afford studies in western Europe,
"studying abroad and in Poland has got the better and worse sides" there are advantages and disadvantages (pluses and minuses) of studying abroad and studing in Poland,
"we have the great universities" znowu to the