email do hotelu i list formalny w sprawie kursu językowego

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Hello,
My family and I are planning a trip to England for a couple of days. We would like to stay at your hotel three nights. Do you have any rooms for four persons? I would also like to know how much you charge per night? Is breakfast included? And what's the weather like? I would be very much grateful to you for answering my questions.
Best regards,
XYZ

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in connection with your advert which I found in the newspaper . I am from Poland and I am interested in English course. I learn this language for three years in the group of twenty people.I think a intermediate level would be the best. I would like to know how long is the course at this level and how many hours a day it take?
I look forward to your answer.
Yours faithfully,
XYZ

We would like to stay at your hotel FOR three nights. Do you have any rooms for four 'persons?' (people)
And (finally) what's the weather like? I would be very 'much' (niepotr) grateful to you for answering my questions.

I am writing in connection with your advert (czego to dotyczylo?) which I found in the newspaper (ale kiedy? rok temu? dwa lata temu?) .
I am from Poland and I am interested in (przedimek) English course. I 'learn' HAVE BEEN LEARNING this language for three years in 'the' A group of twenty people.
I think aN intermediate level would be the best FOR ME. I would like to know how long is the course at this level and how many hours a day it takeS?

Mozesz uzyc person jezeli cos innego zmienisz. Mozesz rowniez ominac.