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Dear Johny,
thank you for your letter. I am very sorry I haven't writen for so long but I had a lot of work.
I am writing to tell you about my new flat. I live in Sopot in a small flat in a block of flats. I share the flat with my friends. It's a very cosy and spacious place. When you go in, there is a long hall. A kitchen is opposite the door, bathroom on the left and my room on the right.
I like my room. I spend a lot of time here reading books, chatting with my friends on the Internet and listening to music.
There is a comfortable bed, a white carpet on the floor and flowerpots on the window sill. It's really a nice place to live.
Many thanks for enclosing photos of your flat. I am sending you photos of my flat too.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes
XYZ