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Dear Johny,
thank you for your letter. I am very sorry I haven't writen for so long but I had a lot of work.

I am writing to tell you about my new flat. I live in Sopot in a small flat in a block of flats. I share the flat with my friends. It's very cosy and spacious place. When you go in, there is a long hall. Kitchen is straight ahead, bathroom on the left and my room on the right.

I like my room. I spend a lot of time reading books, talking on the Internet with my friends, listening to music.
There is a comfortable bed, white carpet on the floor and on the window sill are flowerpots. It's really nice place to live.

Many thanks for enclosing photos your flat. I am sending for you too photos of my flat.
I look forward to having from your soon.

Best wishes
XYZ

Dear Johny,
thank you for your letter. I am very sorry I haven't writen for so long but I had a lot of work.

I am writing to tell you about my new flat. I live in Sopot in a small flat in a block of flats. I share the flat with my friends. It's PRZEDIMEK very cosy and spacious place. When you go in, there is a long hall. PRZEDIMEK Kitchen is straight ahead NAPISZ: NAPRZECIW DRZWI, PRZEDIMEK bathroom on the left and my room on the right.

I like my room. I spend a lot of time GDZIE reading books, talking on the Internet with my friends, AND listening to music.
There is a comfortable bed, PRZEDIMEK white carpet on the floor and DONICE on the window sill are flowerpots. It's PRZEDIMEK really nice place to live.

Many thanks for enclosing photos your flat ZALACZENIE ZDJEC TWOJE MIESZKANIE. I am sending for you too photos of my flat TOO.
I look forward to having ZLE PRZEPISALES from your I TU TEZ ZLE PRZEPISALES soon.

Best wishes
XYZ

bez przedimkow nie zdasz egzaminow na anglistyce :-)

writen

write u r!

eye no :-)

..niezbyt zgrabne to ;( lepiej chatting with my friends..lub coś w tym stylu / having online conversations .. itp

Dziękuję serdecznie za pomoc.
@mg - na razie na anglistykę się nie wybieram ;)

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Dear Johny,
thank you for your letter. I am very sorry I haven't writen for so long but I had a lot of work.

I am writing to tell you about my new flat. I live in Sopot in a small flat in a block of flats. I share the flat with my friends. It's a very cosy and spacious place. When you go in, there is a long hall. A kitchen is opposite the door, bathroom on the left and my room on the right.

I like my room. I spend a lot of time here reading books, chatting with my friends on the Internet and listening to music.
There is a comfortable bed, a white carpet on the floor and flowerpots on the window sill. It's really a nice place to live.

Many thanks for enclosing photos of your flat. I am sending you photos of my flat too.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Best wishes
XYZ

Dear Joh_ny,

@Aaric dzięki serdecznie.

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błędne słowo było wspomniane wczesniej ;-)