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Hi Susan,
I'm going to compete in a television content.
It's about a wild animal's life in their habitats. A host will ask participants about a bird's name after heard a voice from the record.
I want to try because I like wild nature and often go to a forest.
If you want to take part, you must first register online. After a couple of days, they will send you a form to fill up, which you send back them, then you may relax and wait for a positive or negative answer.
Although I'm often in a forest, I start to listen to animals' sounds on youtube recently. I think it will help prepare better.
I'd love you to come to a television studio to watch me. It' may be a nice experience for you and give me more courage. Furthermore, five spectators can win a smartphone.
I'm looking forward to seeing you there.
XYZ
niektóre błedy
I'm going to compete in a television content
A THE host will ask participants about a bird's name after ONI USŁYSZĄ heard a voice from the record.
I want to try IT because I like wild nature and often go to a THE forest.
After a couple of days, they will send you a form to fill up, which you send back them, then you may relax and wait for a positive or negative answer.
Although I'm often in a forest, I start VERB TENSE to listen to animals' sounds on youtube recently. I think it will help ME prepare better.
I'd love you to come to THE television studio to watch me.
Dziekuję.
Tak chyba dobrze?
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Hi Susan,
I'm going to compete in a television contest.
It's about a wild animal's life in their habitats. The host will ask participants about a bird's name after they heard a voice from the record.
I want to try it because I like wild nature and often go to the forest.
If you want to take part, you must first register online. After a couple of days, they will send you a form to complete, which you send back, then you may relax and wait for a positive or negative answer.
Although I'm often in a forest, I started to listen to animal sounds on youtube recently. I think it will help me prepare better.
I'd love you to come to the television studio to watch me. It' may be a nice experience for you and give me more courage. Furthermore, five spectators can win a smartphone.
I'm looking forward to seeing you there.
XYZ
It's about 'a wild animal's life' (tutaj mowisz o jednym 'animal' (l. poj), a pozniej masz 'habitats' to l. mnoga- popraw) in their habitats. The host will ask participants about a bird's name after they heard a 'voice' (nie, zle slowo, tutaj 'sound', you hear a bird's sound not voice) from the record.
Although I'm often in a forest, I started to listen to animal sounds on youtube recently. I think it will help me TO prepare better.
Poprawiłem. Dziękuję za korektę.
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Hi Susan,
I'm going to compete in a television contest.
It's about a wild animals' life in their habitats. The host will ask participants about a bird's name after they heard a sound from the record.
I want to try it because I like wild nature and often go to the forest.
If you want to take part, you must first register online. After a couple of days, they will send you a form to complete, which you send back, then you may relax and wait for a positive or negative answer.
Although I'm often in a forest, I started to listen to animal sounds on youtube recently. I think it will help me to prepare better.
I'd love you to come to the television studio to watch me. It' may be a nice experience for you and give me more courage. Furthermore, five spectators can win a smartphone.
I'm looking forward to seeing you there.
XYZ
It's about 'a' (nie uzywamy przedimkow w l. mn - tutaj niepotrz) wild animals' 'life' (tutaj potrzeba l. mn- lives) in their habitats.
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edytowany przez terri: 06 mar 2020
I wouldn't use 'spectators' in this text.
Cytat: Aaric
I wouldn't use 'spectators' in this text.

mozna 'audience'
Hi Susan,
I'm going to compete in a television contest.
It's about wild animals' lives in their habitats. The host will ask participants about a bird's name after they heard a sound from the record.
I want to try it because I like wild nature and often go to the forest.
If you want to take part, you must first register online. After a couple of days, they will send you a form to complete, which you send back, then you may relax and wait for a positive or negative answer.
Although I'm often in a forest, I started to listen to animal sounds on youtube recently. I think it will help me to prepare better.
I'd love you to come to the television studio to watch me. It' may be a nice experience for you and give me more courage. Furthermore, five persons from the audience can win a smartphone.
I'm looking forward to seeing you there.
XYZ
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Dziękuję za sprawdzenie, czy tak może być? "...five persons from the audience..."
Dobrze, przejdę na jeden wątek.
five audience members
np.np
Hi Susan,
I'm going to compete in a television contest.
It's about wild animals' lives in their habitats. The host will ask participants about a bird's name after they heard a sound from the record.
I want to try it because I like wild nature and often go to the forest.
If you want to take part, you must first register online. After a couple of days, they will send you a form to complete, which you send back, then you may relax and wait for a positive or negative answer.
Although I'm often in a forest, I started to listen to animal sounds on youtube recently. I think it will help me to prepare better.
I'd love you to come to the television studio to watch me. It' may be a nice experience for you and give me more courage. Furthermore, five audience members can win a smartphone.
I'm looking forward to seeing you there.
XYZ
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No tak, dlaczego mi nigdy nie przyjdą na myśl tak trafne słowa, dziękuję.
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