Ło raju... Ok moim zdaniem powinno być tak:
Dear Sirs, (chyba, że wiesz, do kogo ten e-mail trafi)
I am writing on behalf of Theatre Festival comitee of NAZWA SZKOŁY in MIEJSCOWOŚĆ. Please consider my request for funding of our college Theatre Festival.
Traditionally, the even begins 10.04. On average, 10 groups perform. The plays are usually comedies, dramas and adaptations of popular books. Be aware, that the Theatre Festival brings plenty of benefits to students and the school. Participants develop their self-confidence and acting skills. (fragment o
szkole bym wywaliła).
Unfortunately, this year the local government refused to fund the Festival and therefore we are looking for other means of funding. Without it, the event will not take place.
Jeśli chcecie dostać pieniądze musicie im coś zaoferować np:
On average LICZBA people watch the Festival every year. We can offer advertising during the festival, as well as a banner on our Festival/School website.
With kind regards,
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