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„This was the worst dream that I’d ever had”

Have you ever had a such realistic dream that you thought it was true? When we are dreaming about something pleasant we do not even want to wake up and do ours best to keep dreaming as long as it is possible. How many times did you wake up with frown on your face? Unfortunately, our dream are not exclusively pleasant. Sometimes we had bad dreams, one of which have I had the other day.
In my dream I was flying airplane with my friends. Each of us was happy thinking that everything is going well. Unfortunately, luck was not on our side. After two-hours flight the airplane started falling down. Probably, the complications has occurred due to oil spill. It was terrible. There were not much time left. Everyone started to pray. We could not do anything else. As long as I woke up I thought that I am dead. Fortunately, I was wrong. After that I started waking up my friends. I was not able to help them. I looked around and saw that everywhere are mountains covered with snow. Friends of mine were dead and I did not even know where I am. This whole situation struck me. I did not know what to do. I started screaming.
I felt a hand on my back. It was my mom saying that it was only a bad dream. Fortunately, I was already in my own bed. I have to admit that it was the most frightening dream that I have ever had. I will never forget it. I do hope [mozna tak napisac?] that it will never repeat again.

Parę błędów,które widzę:, such a realistic, do our best'Unfortunately our dreamS are,....one of which I had the other...,I was flying An AEROplane,was happy....WAS going well,After two-hours'flight..,complcatios HAD occu...There WAS NOtmuch time...I thougt I WAS dead...around and saw I was surroundedby the the mountains covered...THE whole...'
I do hope..is oK

z tym IS going well i I AM dead , to przesadzilem :( shame on me. chyba za duzo po polsku sie mysli ;/

dzieki.

Have you ever had a such realistic dream that you thought it was true?
When we are dreaming about something pleasant, we do not even want to
wake up and do 'ours' OUR best to keep dreaming as long as it is possible.
How many times did you wake up with A frown on your face? Unfortunately,
our dreamS are not exclusively pleasant. Sometimes we 'had' HAVE bad dreams,
one of which 'have I had' I HAVE HAD the other day.
In my dream I was flying AN airplane with my friends.
After A two-hours flight the airplane started falling down. Probably, 'the' (niepotr) complications haD occurred due to AN oil spill.
There 'were' WAS not much time left.
....As long as I woke up I thought that I am dead.... (coz z tym zdaniem nie tak).
I looked around and saw that everywhere 'are' WERE mountains covered with snow. 'Friends of mine' (mozna MY FRIENDS were dead and I did not even know where I 'am' WAS. This whole situation 'struck me' (cos tu nie tak).
(Tutaj mozna dodac, Suddenly,)I felt a hand on my back.
Fortunately, I was 'already' (dlaczego to already?) in my own bed.
I do hope that 'it will never repeat again' I WILL NEVER HAVE SUCH A DREAM AGAIN.

dzieki wielkie.

>>> As long as I woke up I thought that I am dead....
Wnen I woke up, a strange thought crossed my mind. I had even considered my death.